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WTF
Well this was a piece of crap! Not worth a read. You obviously understand English, it's just a shame you have no concept about writing a story worth telling. Please just stop!
Hopeless
Sorry but there was nothing sexy about that dribble. It was if anything a load of rot. As a woman i have to say main character sounds less real than a plastic barbie.
Good story!!
gave you a 5
More please!
Very hot!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
confused narrator
It is written in Anne's POV but everything that happens is experienced like the men would have experienced it.AShe hears it, sees it, but doesn't feel it.
Good story
I really liked it and don't let people convince you it wasn't good I had a good time reading this and i hope you keep writing
I am with You Annie
Annie I could not have put it better myself. no woman worte this. It sounds like a bunch of bull. I do not know who at literotica.com is posting this shit but they need to be let go.
Keep Writing!
I liked the concept, would love to see it written with more insight into motives and feelings of the characters. Thumbs up! Feel free to check out any of my own stories + feedback
Childish
Small plot, no story build up, childish porn
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