And really, a decent editor that has a good head on their shoulders to stop some of the crap you wrote in this. G'luck.
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Anonymous08/31/15
Dumb story...
Always when I read at the beginning something like "real happend" I know I should stop with reading. But again I got trapped with an extremly idiotic story that proves the author to be stupid.
Why don't write these authors simply their crap story without announcing "it really happened" and throw it away afterwards without publishing?
hello people. You can see the real pictures of my girl and some hot pictures that looked like what I've witnessed in reality with her. I censored them though as FB doesn't approve hardcore.... https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1000100440 73312
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You need an Editor
And really, a decent editor that has a good head on their shoulders to stop some of the crap you wrote in this. G'luck.
Dumb story...
Always when I read at the beginning something like "real happend" I know I should stop with reading. But again I got trapped with an extremly idiotic story that proves the author to be stupid.
Why don't write these authors simply their crap story without announcing "it really happened" and throw it away afterwards without publishing?
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hello people. You can see the real pictures of my girl and some hot pictures that looked like what I've witnessed in reality with her. I censored them though as FB doesn't approve hardcore.... https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1000100440 73312
Fuck me! Couldn't get past the first paragraph!
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