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by chilleywilley02/04/16

Nice story

But. You start too many sentences with the pronoun I. So instead of "I kept moving until he was spent, and then I just rested until..."
I kept moving until he was spent, basking in the orgasmic peace until...

Just a thought

Chilley

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