All Comments on '"Andi" Challenges to Triumph Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Triumphantly Brilliant

One of the best series I have ever read.

RigatonyRigatonyover 8 years ago
for once I agree with Anonymous.

Easily one of the best stories I've read anywhere, ever.

Thanks, Tony

tequilotequiloover 8 years ago
Excellent

Awesome story mate, can't wait for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
speeches

I'm in awe of your writing. The love story is so good that it makes me wish they would change the laws so they could get married. The way you explained Andi's life made me feel like I was part of her family. I hope you continue with this story so we can experience her joy of becoming a mother. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

sabra16023sabra16023over 8 years ago
A Top Notch Series

Great read & looking forward to another chapter. Five Stars. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great read

The story line was brilliant. You probably require a tighter edit in some places and I didn't like her use of the word "slut". It seemed out of character. It's the best I've read in a long time though. I'm a sucker for romance.

TaljinnTaljinnover 8 years ago
Wonderful

Much better as the chapters went on. Much props

PerimedesPerimedesover 8 years ago
One word...

Beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nothing more to say

Despite the fact that they were siblings it all went away as I read it, you should really consider publishing these stories, a few editing instead of having them be siblings they should be childhood friends they grew up together, Andis brothers, Ashlyn Roger and their parents accept him as part of the family Andi could look at drew like a brother but they are really close friends. Forget about a five star rating It should have a ten star rating, no love is as pure as andi and drew, in some of my stories I use them both but its just with friends. Is there gonna be a chapter 4 where they are all kids? That way it can fit into the first three chapters, in the first one you mentioned something about a hearing. So I'm guessing that courts were involved with them. I'm telling you you should really publish these stories in the world erotica , edit a few things here for more customer satisfaction, reword it, I felt like "slut" shouldn't have been said. She was felt as innocent child, but great story non the same

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Beautiful

That was a beautiful story even a few tears.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Simply Amazing

I loved all three stories - for such short stories, these have such depth and amazing emotional resonance; it's left me breathless. I have to say - all three chapters were simply mesmerizing. Typically, you get the jist of where a story is going, where the character arcs are coming into play, and for me none of these stories followed that well worn path. It was a very refreshing, very intense, and very heart felt journey. I absolutely love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

So well done, I love that it's more of a story and less of a sluty fiction thing, I love the intensity and the way you managed to avoid her being blind in the first part. plz write more!!

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8almost 8 years ago
What an amazingly touching story you have given us

This is definitely not the usual incest stroke story you read on this site. It was an emotionally touching story which even brought tears to my old eyes towards the end. Amazingly when she used the word SLUT it seemed so out of place and so out of character for this story . Thank you for for giving us readers such a beautiful story. Well done...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

A beautiful love story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing

He best I have ever read on here. I love how it's more story than sex. And love character development.

goodwritingfangoodwritingfanalmost 7 years ago
Brilliant series

Well structured, great rounded characters, brilliant dialogues and hot as hell.

How this series is not at the top of the list in this category I don't understand!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This story was such a heart touching story

petcock17petcock17about 6 years ago
Very cool

It started slow for me but came out very good in the end. A very different story from what I've been reading but I liked it very much, so much that I gave it a favorite story which I've not done before. A lot of love and support some may think to cheezy or cheeky but I like that especially with brothers and sisters. Good job.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

Dude this was really good besides a few grammatical errors the story was heartwarming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow AMAZING!!!!

Like this was amazing. I loved the incestuous sexy parts but the story was amazing. I just want more. Hell you can take the details of the sex put and I still want to read more. Id love more stories. Omg.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Use of the word slut

I think, given how she felt about herself and her questions about Drew's intentions, that she felt like a slut. The fact that Drew immediately chastised her for it is what convinced her that Drew really did love her, and didn't see her as a conquest or as a slut. Actually, an important plot point IMHO.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Jerker

Well.....

Started reading for a few jerks on the dick, ended up with a few tears being jerked out as well,..

First time an erotic story did THAT to me.......

Great story!

speedbump65speedbump65about 4 years ago
Awesome

Please Please Please write more stories like this I loved it.

Cutty4637Cutty4637over 3 years ago

One of the best stories I've read in a while. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Just a pure "Love" little bit of naughty :D This is called a love ince-story. Try to get the idea. How to reduce a star. *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Should be classified as psychological horror. The male protagonist manipulates his family, friends and even his job to make his young sister totally dependent of him so he can abuse her without any resistance.

This aspect of his mind could be elaborated more, I hoped for a end where the girl realized what he was doing, but alas ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved it. Very romantic,i cried in parts. It was almost like i was reading a Nicholas Sparks novel. I even cried in a few places,the girls getting back together was awesome. Thank you

Smartest1Smartest18 months ago

Beautiful story.

It seemed so real. That's why I began to think that Andi's reasoning was often lacking.

Drew manipulating? How about showing his sister not to be afraid, of him and living with him without her mom. Simply a matter of building confidence.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I agree with the anonymous post from serval years ago , drew is manipulative , the whole family is honestly . Just look at how they laid lyns marriage out to dry all so drew and andi could fuck

oldtwitoldtwit4 months ago

Oh I think I'm disappointed that mummy and daddy didn't join the fun with the kids, NO I'm just joking,.

Not a bad story, change him being her brother into being her sisters best male friend and you could have a normal story, but you wrote a good one here.

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