All Comments on 'It's All About Trust'

a good read top stuff ,

Wonderful description of a First Time - hmm, seems like asking for a sequel? Maybe after some misunderstandings, some kind of getting hurt about things...

a wonderful new story LP... wow!!

Beautiful story LP

Nicely written, tender and sexy.

Congrats on your E.

Will's

Damn! I really wish my first time was like that! You did a fabulous job!!

A sweet story, great job!

Great story. Little light on the actual sex, but in this case it was a good thing. Anything more, and you would have lost the point of the story, any less and it woulden't have been at Literotica. ;)

As I think back over the the first time I had sex. I wish that I too could have had a best friend to be with for that very special first time. Being able to share the trust and concerns that comes with losing ones cherry as told in this story. It is important to talk about the day after, (meaning their frindship), is something that I think young folks are not doing and should.

Loved the lead in. It rang true for me and did a wonderful job of setting up the sex.

Only thing that I noticed that bugged me was the use of English expressions, e.g. "fancy him," "bloke," etc. But then I read "ass" rather than "arse," "panties" rather than "knickers." I don't much care for the English expressions myself but it made me wonder if the narrator is suppose to be English but going to school in America.

I really loved your story. Just wish my first time had been that sweet and memorable.

Are you planning a sequel?

Beautiful love story. Like others, I, too, wish my first time had been this special! Keep up the fine writing.

The "E" and "H" are well deserved.

This should be in all libraries in the HOW TO BREAK IN A VIRGIN, section. And made to be part of Health, and high school sexual studies for teenagers. Unfortunately, too many parents would object to the content even if they did agree with it.

As Always

I Am the

Dirt Man

It is one of the great lovestories I have read in this site. please Keep it up.

Well-written, skillfully set up. The emotions and the activity all rang true. Keep writing.

Out of all the first time stories on Literotica, I keep coming back to yours. I'm usually not one to re-read stories in books or online. But I love this one & just wanted to say thanx for making everytime feel like the first time. Kisses, ~Saigrah.

I read a lot of first time stories and this is one of the first ones I have bothered to leave a comment on. Truly genius work. I was very aroused. Still am.

Great job!

~WOK

what a great story! truly one of the best i've ever read here, and the first one i bother to comment. Great.

I loved your story, it was very sweet and well written!

So real and so close to home. Thanks so much. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A true favorite of mine.

Well written and thought out before hand. Please continue the storyline if possible. Looking forward to reading more of your writings. Nice!!!

Good God, I only wish MY first time had been like this!!! So perfectly written; perfect mastery of the situation. Thanks.

Well written and it rang true. Many of the stories read like an experienced 30+ man in a teen body covorting with the young maiden.

Yours had the misgivings, fumblings and curiousness. Yours also didn't have the female experience four thundering orgasms, each more powerful then the last. I am a writer and enjoy the female POV. Good Story.

Certainly not by any author I have read in this Forum.

Thanks for taking the time to write this. I loved it.

It is obvious that this was a story long in the making. Just for this, I applaud you. But to also make such a believable chemistry between the two virgins is amazing. This story brings back vivid memories of my own teenage years, and I'm sure it hits home for many others as well. The characters are nicely drawn and developed, not comepletely overbearing and crude. They have a sense of humanity about them and I like that. We are but humans after all. The sex itself...well...let's just say HOT. Wonderful work. Look forward to more ;)

easily the best story ive ever read. simply amazing, wonderful

This story was awesome, sensitive and realistic...i really cared about these characters...keep up the good work!

Written with a sense of emotion and tenderness not generally captured in many of the posted stories. Well done indeed!

It's excellent to read a story in which a girl's first penetration isn't instantly sexually wonderful. We all know that first times often aren't, but in erotica they always are. This felt much more real because her focus is on the newness of the experience, not the eroticism of it. Altogether a well constructed, well expressed story - congratulations.

nice and touching story

it was nice till the end. did she ever stay with steven?they should have hooked up and gotten married.

By the time I really started getting into it, it was over. I do wish you the needing had not come at the point that it did. Thanks for sharing your tale.

Fantastic Scenario. I loved how it all blossomed into some kind of love tale.

Would of loved to have known what happened next though!

Sequel?? :)

the guy shouldnt of worn a condom

Please Carry on this story!

Tender, loving, romantic. What other adjectives could I use? I really enjoyed your story. It is much more realistic than most stories on Literotica. These two teenagers are worrying about the consequences and whether having sex will alter their future relationship. Being best friends, they really do care about each other, and you've captured that extremely well. Perhaps one of the reasons I enjoyed this story so much is that I married my best friend. I was so unsure for our first time, I could barely sustain an erection. But it was soooo exciting, that I couldn't wait to do it again. I'd like to see a sequel to this story. Thanks.

this needs a sequel i want to know what happens next with Cathy and Steven

Gross