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For The Whored: The Future: Ch. 18

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/15

It can only get better

This story geys bdetter every day. Ignore the sex (not a chance) . There have bèen a lot of tines that spontanious laughter has broken out (resulting in coffee/tea/drinks being sprayed everywhere). Keep up the good work,it really is a pitty this story is nearing it's end.

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by TJSkywind09/12/15

Snarkle

That's covering my mouth when I try to keep the laughter down. Having fun! Thanks!

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by Thatawfulwowporno09/12/15

erf

I blame "sa+id" on my cat stepping on my keyboard during editing. submitting a correction.

Also, with the success of this story, I have been encouraged to reapproach and edit my previous novel "Lilah". Maybe I can take what I have learned here and improve my other life's work.

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