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Story lacking
any kind of depth. Who? Why? What for? All we get is 2 people who jump into bed have sex, ask a question, end of story.
No rhyme or reason to it.
Your title says Never Before, with the ease that she did it this time, how do we know that? How do we know anything? She opens the door, puts on a tea kettle, has sex that's it; the end.
Nothing. Even the surprise blowjob at the end is done in every cheating wife story, it is as common as putting on your shoes.
George
Not good,
just another poorly written cheating slut story. Just a simple question, why did she cheat?
If cheating, cheat all the way?
If you care enuf about someone to fuck them, cheating on your spouse, you should go all the way and fuck without benefit of birth control. The condom(s) ruined this story for me, and I graded you accordingly.
I agree with Don
He should have knocked her up. The whole point of cheating is that it's illicit and naughty. Having another man's baby is intense.
Conditional Agreement with Donie and Anon
Pregnancy would be good but only if she were your wife so you could raise the bastard child as your own. Sick enuff 4 ya - Love it doncha! Kisses Sick One's!
consequences
std, pregnancy whatever; where she pays a serious price for daliance. even want the 'i love you, was only sex and the like, and the words met with indifference, and you made your bed, lie in it
background?
I don't like buildup that is too wordy, but this story needed a little... who is Adrian? How did Carol meet him-- what brought them to this point?
Other than that, I think it's an excellent story; I appreciate it being erotic without being too graphic and they practised relative safety with a condom.
I don't know
There was just a hint as to the reason, and yo adrian. The fallout for this may not be positive for either of them, ultimately. One can anticipate.
Not good!
Where is the story? It is like a snap shot of just the sex without any indication of who or why the event is taking place.
1ST TIME AGAIN
and an encore for the future. TK U MLJ LV NV
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