Straight Chris Makes a Bet

BIG DIFFERENCE

GEEZ BUD, LEARN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN "PUBLIC" AND PUBIC.

OH NO! TYPO! THE HUMANITY!

Seriously? I don't have a lot of time to write so I'm only ever submitting my first drafts. One typo in 1,582 words in just this story and you have a meltdown?

Just kidding, I'm actually really annoyed with myself for missing that. I've submitted an edited version. Thank you for bringing it to my attention, I hope it didn't take you out of the story too much.

don't pay attention

most of these trolls don't even read for the actual erotica. They read to expose their prize winning editing skills and general irritability....

This place needs an ignore option.....

Hot story!

I didn't catch he typo. I read it as pubic because that is what I was expecting I guess. Anyway, really enjoyed the story! More please!!!

Mistakes

Actually you would be surprised how often that mistake is made. Good story. My suggestion is to have some else read it. We can't see our mistakes.

Not bad at all

These people who get all het up about a typo make me wonder why they read the stories. It can't be for the sex (since they spend so much effort worrying about such a minor thing as a spelling error) so I suggest that we have a small army of grammar fetish lovers who get all excited and aroused over such things!
Perhaps they get hard-ons from finding especially obscure errors!!

If your mind is on the story and is enjoying it then you gloss over minor mistakes, especially when there are very few. It's only when grammatical and typographical errors proliferate and take over the story that they spoil things whereas in this case it's just one extra letter that's involved.
And such errors are also extremely hard for the writer to spot because they don't set off any spellchecker alarms - another reason to forgive such things.

But ignoring all that, this is a cute story that's realistic enough to get you dreaming or even to get you casting your own mind back to that day in the shower when something very similar happened to you.
Short and sweet!

dear anon,

Get over it....did you know there are typos in award winning, best selling author novels? And somehow nobody gives a crap. Anywho wonderful story dunno.

Oh my...

That was truly.. Interesting!

I love the progression, the quickly overcome hesitancy, the pace really keeps up with the eroticism. I'd love to read a chapter 2 where Chris becomes addicted to cum and is taught how to do the 'under 20 trick'.

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