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Dominating Miss Davenshaw Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/02/15

Long term prognosis isn't good.

I can't wait until the business tanks and all these bozos lose their jobs because she can't do hers and they are incompetent. 5 stars for story so far.

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by Anonymous09/02/15

They're losers

First two chapters were better.

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by Anonymous09/03/15

Great!

Fantastic work! You're my favorite new author in a long, long time! Please keep writing more!

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by Anonymous09/09/15

Disappointing

First chapter was great but last two have been disappointing. Master slave was fine but the humiliation wasn't necessary.

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