That was a superbly well constructed and well thought out story; it cunningly transformed from a good but standard sub-dom fantasy into a mystery thriller and ends with a fantastic, not to mention erotic, twist. Will there be any more adventures for this protagonist? Maybe she could take a werewolf for walkies in the park? ;-) Outstanding work XXX
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Drama!
That was a superbly well constructed and well thought out story; it cunningly transformed from a good but standard sub-dom fantasy into a mystery thriller and ends with a fantastic, not to mention erotic, twist. Will there be any more adventures for this protagonist? Maybe she could take a werewolf for walkies in the park? ;-) Outstanding work XXX
Awesome!
I loved the dofferent transitions of the story!
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