by HeyAll
Excellent story telling, I was captivated after a few paragraphs. Look forward to more of this unlikely couple.
S
A wonderful story that I hope is only the beginning of more chapters with these two!
Thank you so much!
L
believe i have read them all and they are the greatest. would like to re-visit them and find out what the prude girls did with them selves when they went back to there homes and jobs.
I love these sexual awakening stories and this one ranks at the top with a few more. Like others that commented, I would love to see how this experience changes Melinda's life. So I hope chapter 2 is in the very near future.
Really enjoyed it perhaps a little unlikely to turn someone that fast, but really good. Thanks
Another top story from a top author. Very erotic and sensual made got me quite got and bothered
1. This was hot and original. No male bashing so thank you.
2. I loved most of it except the flashback to her professor and her first experience not being with Carmen.
3. The flashback was unnecessary - Carmen's seduction was more than enough to entice Melinda into lesbianism.
4. Carmen should have been Melinda's first taste since she did the seduction. Just thoughts - again the story was hot.