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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years ago
Ellen you naughty

Girl : the last stanza was too much !!!5- ed !

legerdemerlegerdemerover 8 years ago
Oh so good!

I might have missed this for too long - so glad Todski pointed us to it in PF&D.

I have little to say other than I loved it, loved the way you started in such a serious vein and ended up hitting my laugh button. And I couldn't agree More with Ashesh about the last stanza - it's a hoot!

PiscatorPiscatorover 8 years ago

Clever yet not without depth. May make a churchgoer of me yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Glad to see these "Letters"

Ellen More,

I do adore

your mystery phrases

that shine in the light.

A simple phrase

a subtle turn

your vexng message:

Next; I yearn

zammzammover 6 years ago
hahaha

Loved it

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