Locker Room Revenge

yeah sure

Dude, I'd never agree to date a character like this one and I can deepthroat better than any man. Empty and callous always gets boring.

Started out hot but...

shoving her face in the toilet was stupid, not sexy at all. Your character is a totally immature asshole.

Nothing erotic or sexy about this mess.

Just awful story

Stop writing

This story is stupid.

Shit story and shit character.

Lame

This sounds like it was written by a nerdy 14 year old while jerking off.

This sickened me

She will never be the same do you know how much councaling she would need just because she liked a guy ? Ohh I know the rest of her life......

Nah.

Yeah, this was really dumb. "I'll stick her head in the toilet now" - I mean, it's not even exciting to read.

So sexy

Well-written and unapologetically cruel. I love the humilation and the lack of remorse. Incredibly hot.

This honestly wasn't even good. This was more than cruel and was written so poorly. Awful.

Bro really?

If I found out a cutie liked me that much I'd forget the other girl! Ask her out, take her on cute dates. End of story.

You have the shittiest taste

I would have kept the blonde and forgotten that J-something bitch while balls deep in her. Agreeing to do anal at first chance? Fucking keeper!

This story was lame all around and I feel bad for the other people who read this and waste the five minutes it took to skim through it. Weaksauce.

stick her head in the toilet? how lame dude

eh

Soooo honestly I'd like to stick your head in a toilet and drown you kill yourself this was bullshit dude I mean honestly I'd take the blonde and marry her she's a submissive slut best wife ever least u know she would never say no

Waste of time

This was a waste of time to read. What a lame story. It was too unrealistic to get into.

fucked up

you know someone should take you into a room with a bunch of guys and let them do you that way. I bet you wouldn't be into treating a girl like that anymore. you would have to be a complete dumbass to do that to a girl thats willing to do all that for you. in the story you say you did it cause the black girl you liked wouldn't betray her friend. so what happens if you go out with the girl and she finds you lame and doesnt won't to see you anymore. you done fucked up with the girl that worships you.

This is one of my favorite stories; I love your writing.

Avenging Sarah

I'm sure some kind of karma will be coming in his direction... maybe she agreed to finally go out with him for a reason.I'd hope to see him get his just desserts.

Ruining a young girls life that you don't have the balls to tell that you're not interested. Boarding school? Surprised the girl didn't try killing herself. Oh and all just to get his dick wet.

sick

This is as bad as one similar written by Nageren.

Even though

I know it's just a story and all, if found out a guy did that to a sweet innocent young girl, I would take a 2 foot garden hose and stick it up his ass. Then take a piece of barbed wire about 1 1\2 feet long. Stick the wire inside the hose, then holding the wire in place, yank the house out and throw it away, leaving about an inch or so of barbed wire sticking out his asshole. Then watch as he tries to get it out.