All Comments on 'Unfairer Sex Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good

Very good stories. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loving it!

I can't wait for more :)

ElaphiElaphiover 8 years ago
Perfection

God these are awesome. This is exactly what I've been looking for in a story. Keep em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Twins and sister

He should invite his sister to come to the twins place with him.

DarnusesDarnusesover 8 years ago
So amazing!

Incredibly well done, please keep going, these are very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good storie

Very good storie. Keep up the good works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Id like more

This is a great story. Thank you. Please write more.

mharrisonmharrisonover 8 years ago
Excellent

Please continue - really enjoying this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
gr8 story

make more of these please

Hask225Hask225over 8 years ago
Doing great, but don't stop!

I have so far enjoyed this story so so much, and find that it has great potential just please don't stop just yet. I can't wait to see this series expand to its full potential :) thank you for the stories so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really fun concept

I'm quite impressed, original and fun - and hot!

J

Zeke503Zeke503about 8 years ago
Continue please

It is very refreshing to see where an author has established a premise for a story involving 'mind control' in which the teller is not a sex mad blithering idiot looking out only for himself. I hope that the delay in posting of additional chapters is so that you feel you are creating interesting and enjoyable sequences rather than that you have found something else that will remove you from our sight. Please keep writing and posting the results for our continued entertainment and enjoyment.

lonewolfalphalonewolfalphaabout 8 years ago

love it hope you continue writing this story and do not give up on it

notsooldpervertnotsooldpervertover 7 years ago
Don't stop now!

We want more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Visit their profile

The lack of continuation is explained in their description

denise_Sdenise_Sabout 7 years ago
OMG

Please keep it Cummings....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
HOT Series!

More, please. Love your imagination.

C_frommnC_frommnover 5 years ago
C'mon

You get around to the Twins. and Stop. that is too cruel.

SorchakSorchakabout 5 years ago
Guess more isn't happening

as it's been 4.5 years since this chapter. Too bad, cuz this was a good one. I would really like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More Please

Please keep this story going!!! PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Agreed

I agree, would love to see more of this story, but you've been quiet for a long time so....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

it's being 6 years. Please continue. Add spice with Bro-Sis love. Virginity lost to her brother, and she wants a baby from brother. like that. This is so a good story.

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fangalmost 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this concept, definitely gonna fuel my fantasies for a while.

MakehandpartyMakehandpartyover 1 year ago

I wish there was more. This is excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i LIKE THIS STORIES. MORE PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I remember she said in one of the previous chapters (the sister) she wanted to save her virginity for someone special. I guess her brother, being a literal agent of the Organizers (gods of the universe) isn't that special ;) Shame there's no more chapters. Would have loved to see her become her brother's sexy wife after giving it up to him and bear his children. That would have been hot.

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