All Comments on 'A Submissive at Heart Ch. 05'

as a submissive to a man he needs to be pretty for him

don't take so long between chapters please

I don't understand why you still insist you are straight. You are at the very least bi. If this is a true story, I would like to know how you felt after 3 months of being fucked and sucking cock. My thinking is that you will want to continue being a fag for Gerald. I think we need to hear more.

As a bit of an epilogue after Gerald and Mark left us Michelle did not want to be intimate with me anymore after all the gay stuff. She just did not see me as a man anymore. We stayed together and she found another lover and I am now a full time homosexual. If people tell you your core sexuality can’t change they are wrong. I live in the spare bedroom now and have a full time stud boyfriend.

WTF?! The whole idea that his former lover/girlfriend has effectively dumped him and helps him turn sissy is unbelievable! Even if he likes being a fag,living in the same apartment as his ex is crappola!

She'll certainly be heading for London with Mark while he's tooling down the Hershey Highway!

I love your entire series, I hope something like this can happen to me pretty soon.

I can't wait to read what happens next!!

Keep writing. The story has to continue.

I loved this story - as unrealistic as it was - I'd love it if my wife and I both took male lovers... it'll never happen, still, it's nice to fantasise...

Yes, it is unrealistic as one other commenter says, but it is soooo damn hot and erotic! I would love to have a boyfriend who treated me and fucked me like a woman. So sexy! I would love for my wife to have a big dicked lover too.

Wish there were more chapters to this story.

This story is super hot, I only wish you had written more chapters! Need to find my Gerald.

Mmm heaven, submitting and being feminised, perfect. Write again soon, x sissy Lucy

What a pitty the story stopped......

I know first hand how difficult it is to write one of these stories so I appreciated the effort and time it took. I love the topic and story line, the one suggestion I would make is to combine your chapters, they are too short as a stand alone chapter. It may be a result of that's as far as you could go at the time, but I would recommend just coming back to the story and adding to it instead of publishing what you have done thus far. Keep it up, love to read more.