All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girlfriend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Hot

I just can't wait for the need chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great story!

So awesome!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
C'mon

Almost busted, then it ended, total sadness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
AWESOME!

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
MORE....

hot story... really really good. please write another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
great story

Would like to say that is a great story for the fisrts chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
VERY HOT

ICAME TWICE WHILE READING THIS STORY CANT WAIT FOR MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Awaiting the next chapter,.,,,!!!!

beautifully written story... so incredibly arousing! I can't wait until the next chapter is posted....

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Can I Be Ur Little Girl Daddy

Made me feel exactly like the little girl. I too was wet and wanted daddys cock. By the end of the chapter I was so full of desire I went out to find my daddy too. I met him here online and he became my daddy instantly. We met and I sucked daddy because the author Andrew made me want to. Chapter 2 maybe I will *uck...

CajunSteveCajunSteveover 20 years ago
About one of the best online

Thank you for showing the innocents of young girl but maturaty. Thank you showing the loving father .. but yet a caring lover! About one of the best I have read here! THANK YOU!

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
What a delicious start...

to what may become a really great story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Absolutely Fantastic ...

One of the best reads I think had privilage of reading in a good long while. Do hope you post more!!

~ Lady Kitten.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what the hell

I was looking up lyrics to know the title of the song when this came up. Who wrote this? A 50 year old? No 18 year old acts like that. She sounds 13.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Should you tell us about it...?

No.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I love it!!!

Makes me want to play with my girls!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
FFS

And yet another dreadful little attempt at writing a story. Who knew it's impossible to address one's father without having to address him as daddy in every. fucking. sentence. Clearly, your only goal in this complete shit story is to just type daddy as many times as it's possible for you to do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Damn, someone woke up in a pissy mood, lol. I didn't really notice 'daddy' being over used. ...I did note a few other things such as the need for contractions when they're talking. Read the stuff out loud and it becomes obvious. Another thing the author does that I noticed in a different chapter is improperly stretching words...(usually during sex;) 'oh fuckkkkk' instead of 'fuuuuuck' ...lots like that, again read it out loud and it solves itself!l

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Damn well better .one more story to finish it off They need to move and have children

and a very after life. The way some writers drag it on is unreal to me .

I for o e liked the story . Seems some do not fathom the jest of the story .

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