Fugitive Wife

LOL

Ha, ha, ha good humorous small story.

Wrong Category

A good story, but in the the wrong category. In fact probably should have been submitted to a crime type website, rather than this one.

Another good story from @imhapless...

Another good story from @imhapless...Funny, easy to read, kept our interest always high, and in the end we had the LW, after all....4*

Comedy Noir

Fun, as long as you do not think too much!

ORIGINAL!

Wonderful Sunday Morning Read. You have crafted a couple potentially great characters. How about a sequel?

Enjoyed it

thanks for the offering. I agree. Not really a loving wife tale.

Original!

A great Sunday morning read

*****

A great little "down time" read!
Thx!!

Entertaining ... Full marks

Reads like Mickey Spillaine

Sequels?

It looks like the beginning of a beautiful relationship...nice diversion...thanks.

Well that was funny!

It could have been entitled "The Wild, Wild West". At least it was entertaining and there wasn't a cuckold in sight! Well played.

Different

but I found it too absurd to be interesting. Just my opinion.

Hmm

Once I tweaked my 'absurdity gain' in my brain, I enjoyed it. It was sort of like a Max Bolan novel, except this guy isn't a closet homosexual like Max.

However, I did find one thing so incredible that it broke my suspension of disbelief. The idea that there is even a half decent Chinese restaurant in South Dakota (or Nebraska for that matter) just set off my BS alarm far too much!

Great story

Maybe not loving wives, unrealistic and OTT, but who cares. I thought it was decent cops and robbers tale with sex thrown in.

Five Stars - funny and erotic

Yesterday I was lamenting the dearth of good stories - this one made my day. Funny, well paced, interesting - well done!

Loving wives story

The girl was wife and she cheated on her robber husband=extramarital affair.......But the BTB and Cuck crowd are happy for this together........and I LOL

.45 ACP Korth Classic

Points for humor. Points for a tall dame. Minus points 'cause she had big tits. Whole batch of points for the excellent and the proof reading. But all unnecessary. You had me at .45 ACP Korth Classic

Quite Fun

Fun story. Enough sex to make it appropriate, and a decent amount of intrigue!
Good job.

A challenging piece of fiction -

It's hard to make a hero who is a maroon...

" a Chinese beer that I thought tasted like horse piss (not that I drink horse piss, by the way, just what I imagine horse piss would taste like)"

but you've done it. Cool.

Green-something

almost

I see I'm not the only one that finds the idea of a good Chinese restaurant in SD or Neb. to be just too far out there.

Probably the funniest story this week. *****

Fun Read****

It's good reading. Thanks for sharing.

Heh heh heh

Thanks for the laughs. Great tale!

Thanks

Enjoyed it enormously

Fun Read

A very enjoyable read.

Good Story !!!

Good story,decent plot,a 'good' guy(?),a girl,some villains,some sex,and the good guys win. A fun to read story !!!

Great story .... Thanks

To all the idiots

That dont think there is decent Chinese in Nebraska or the Dakotas: Do you honestly think that cuisine just magically appeared in your state. FFS Chinese immigrants are in every state. Some start restaurants. We have telephones, computerized gizmo thingies and even indoor plumbin in the rich neighborhoods. Damn elitists.