Gesus Ralph

I will just wait...

...to see if you are going to continue this one.

Damn

You know, I believe your impression of the readers here is that we are as stupid as the characters in this tale. I don't know. Maybe it's me. I guess I'll wait for what I hope will be the final entry in this series.

I'll rate it when it's over

I thought part 1 was enough...but...

I thought part 1 was enough...but we have to wait for part 3 to know the ending...I rated this part 1*, because of the writer's introduction...Why a writer needs to lower himself to the level of those who talk bad about him?

Dont ever acknowledge the critics get to you

it lowers your integrity as a writer. You write pretty well-I personally dont care that much for this story, it's been much better done in the past, but you write well. No need to answer or write for those who are critical of a post.

Anons

As an poster in blank I see how many other anons I can id by their style of posting and suggest that some writers do the same its obvious that some writers are trashing stories and praising their own as anons with multiple posts which is easily done.. As to this story it is as bad as your other submissions and I give it a 2* for effort.

I can't

really get it why you post this story.

the main character Louise is dumb for 2. she has absolutely no insight into human nature. she doesn't know her husband and she knows even less about her so called women friends. she has no values it seems either.

her so called friends are also a revelation to human beeings. not too long ago we would have burned them on a stake.

so please let us dumb readers know : where in hell is the erotic part of this story ?

to tell you honestly I do understand your wife (Maddeningly in love with my wife who can't for the life of her fathom my interest in this),

She seems pretty clever

Break in the Wall

A marriage is a castle that has to be protected with a wall surrounding the two people inside. There is no room for more than two in a marriage. If the wall falls apart from lack of maintenance, vermin may get in. If one of the couple is not vigilant, they may let an intruder in. There is NEVER any good reason for another person to enter into that castle. It is NEVER for the good of the couple. Even if one of the couple is feeling low, they have to keep in mind that the castle is there to protect them. It is for their own good. Tearing the walls down and demolishing the castle will adversely effect their ability to survive.

Oh dear, Oh dear, sugna.

Your castle wall is a terribly sweet analogy, but really ?? Walls keep people in, as well as keeping people out.

Ask a prisoner in gaol.

Sometimes day release can help the prisoner adjust to life and become a better human being.

L

why

So some have criticized your story. And their criticism means what to the price of tea in china? Grow up if you get your feelings hurt over comments maybe you shouldn't write. As for the scuzzie wife remark I have news for you my wife is so far from your insinuation. That is the main problem with the world today people get upset when their criticized yet they turn around and do the same thing. But what do I know i'm just an ass scratching anonymous poster. Peace to all.

interesting and different

Hope to read more ....and soon.

Thank You...

...for not redundantly adding an 's' to BFF. Big pet peeve of mine.

Don't listen to the haters.

"Those who don't build must burn." - Ray Bradbury

Well this is going to be interesting...

how it will turn out. Both parties were in the wrong, but Louise was worse because she gave away control of herself with the first drink. When someone loses control, it usually starts with alcohol.
5 *'s

Interesting

Can't wait to see how everything shakes out. Will Ralph listen . will he change his mind on the Extra he is getting from an "old" fuck buddie or will he Combine the house's and will Sylvia go along.

Hypocrisy

@ luedon Sugna is right. In your story the extramarital sex practicer wife persuaded the husband's young mistress not to look for married man. You showed in your story the most extramarital sex practicers want frredom outside the walls of the marriage for themselves. If your character wife followed your opinion she SHOULD HELP HER HUSBAND's EXTRAMARITAL AFFAIR WITH THE YOUNG GIRL. Instead of this she was against her husband's affair. I LOL on you.............An American's survay showed 93% of the people think the faithfulness is important in the marriage. The cheaters (and the hot wives in the cuckold marriage) think the other spouse should be faithful, if he/she had extramarital affairs. I LOL.
In male form. I was about 18 years old and my friend's father boasted about his extramarital affairs with other wives and women to his son and me and later (I think he forgot that earlier ) he was proud of his wife was faithful. (My friend did not like his father.............) He wanted to teach us for the life..............

dear dear annony you're such a fool. These are fictional stories

That means you brain dead asshole, they are not real. Written for pure masturbation enjoyment. But I guess when you have a 3 inch cock and no hope of ever having a real woman you hate the idea of anyone enjoying a good hard ;long fuck! So eat shit asshole annony, I gave this a 5 for effort and content. Grow up, no one wants to hear or read your sad tales of nasty girl she cheated and fucked another man!! SO go away!!

Since you won't lwet anyone send an note to you on here, dear palewriter

I have to tell you here, what an asshole you are. I have given this story a 5, all the characters were great and the story excellent.

Not my cup of tea

The intro taking shots at critics is a waste of time, plus you waved the proverbial red flag at the anon bull. They now know you're thin skinned. Oh, it's "without further ado" not "due". As to the story, to me it reads like some random guy telling a story to a bunch of other guys at deer camp and not anything like a woman telling her tale. That's my take. It doesn't work for me. You have an audience and they enjoy your style. Write for them and ignore the rest of us or conversely, work on what you're presenting with an eye toward introducing your characters to us, adding some background and context, clue us in or at least tease us with our possibly learning the "why" things are the way they are with your protagonists.

Great Story Line****

Something different and a good read. I hope there is another part to tie off the loose ends. Thanks for sharing.

2*s

My wife is never scuzzy . I am not moribund ,yet . 2*s for you .
You mean the other anonymous commenters .

AMerryman

P. S. What is scuzzy ? Someone ?

Finish This Story, Please

Thanks for your work. But please finish this story.

It is my intention to write a conclusion

Perhaps this week if I can find the time. I just need to decide who wins.

Easy To Blame Others

“I never intended to fuck those men and if I had not gotten so god damn drunk I never would have.” – If you hadn’t gone out on your “Modern Woman Night” none of it would have happened.

louise

she deserves scorched earth treatment. if you play in shit your gonna get it on you. is it ok to give up your WHOLE life in less than 15 seconds? once the other dick is in there it's done and done, game over

Interesting

I do not think that we have a Loving Husband who knows how to handle himself, but we do have a very stupid wife.

The road to Hell is wide and well paved.

Does anyone think that it's by chance ? I'm not judging, The smartest people learn from mistakes made by others. Oh baby it's a wild world. ?

Boo Hoo

She was drunk. She was drugged. Boo hoo. She was set up. Boo hoo. She was given terrible advice from a girlfriend. Boo hoo. She wasn't getting as much sex from Ralph as she had in the earlier years of her marriage. Boo hoo. She was taken advantage of and gang fucked in the hotel. Boo hoo. Now Ralph was getting all the pussy he wanted every night from someone else. Boo hoo. She set this fiasco in motion against the wishes of her husband. She chose to go out drinking with the girls over his objections. She could have called Ralph to come get her, but she didn't. She made no effort to clean up after being gangbanged. She accepted drugs from the same girls who led her into this mess. She knew what her husband's response would be. Pity party is over. Accept the divorce. Accept Ralph remarrying the cunt who helped set you up. Find out you caught an STD. Life is about choices. Cuckolding Ralph was a marriage killer. Tough.

Still not finished

Reading the comments, especially those misogynists out there, I really wonder if they have really read the stories of if they are just really stupid people.

I will rate when the story is complete.

Further Thoughts

Sylvia and June obviously don’t think there’s anything wrong with Ralph’s ass!

“I never did fuck that Roger or that little shit Willy.” – Then why did she start to deny that Willy was short with a hair-trigger?

“I didn't see Ralph in the pictures of the guys carrying the girls into the cheap motel across the street but it was his crowd so I figured he had to be there.” – Gee, he got a little lap dance action, and his FRIENDS took the dancers to the motel, so OF COURSE he fucked the girls, too! Makes sense to me. (Sarcasm I hope duly noted!)

As I said in my earlier comment, the drugs and alcohol couldn’t have been an issue if she hadn’t gone on her “modern women’s night out”!

She cheated way before that orgy

The first make out session or hand job she shared with Willy or Roger would be the first time she cheated. Anything that you can't do with someone else, while your spouse is there, is cheating. She's a woman, so she should know this. If her boss kissed her or touched her breast, she would sue him for ''SEXUAL'' harassment. Because open mouth kissing and hand jobs are sex acts. So the orgy or gang bang are just more gas for the fire. Besides without the kissing and hand jobs, letting people think that your husband is a cuckold is a betrayal in itself, so the pot would boil over sooner or later.

Any more of this to come.

Been a fair few months since this chapter, is there a finale???

She was delusional

She didn't fuck her life up in one night. She fucked it up the first time she went out with her whore/slut friends. It's amazing how stupid some people can be. She figures if she threatens him he'll come running and claim her? The first time she went off the reservation would be the last time she'd be allowed back.

Still More Thoughts

"But now the game was on and somehow I had to save face" - Oh, sure, you don't want to let those cheating sluts to think that you're a faithful wife! Oh, no, can't let THAT happen!

Definitely needs FTDS!

Interested in more.

Gave it a rare 4.

She still deserved to lose him even if she didn't plan on being used as a whore.

She still cheated with Roger and treated him like shit and disrespected him.

Jane and the other fuckers need charged with kidnap and rape.

THE TIME FOR TALK IS OVER

now its reading the written words on the wall. TK U MLJ LV NV

If this is it, then the whole story line is stupider than even I thought.

There needs to be a reckoning for Jane and Sylvia and real come to "Gesus" (really? that is what you write, and what was that other shit, "hael" ) meeting between the 2 about her disrespect and his lack of sex activity. You gotta fuck your woman.

Not....

In my opinion, one of this writer's better efforts. Mainly, and again, in my opinion, because there's at least half the story left to be told.

Still divorce her

@Mainefiddleheads

re:
12/01/15
It is my intention to write a conclusion
Perhaps this week if I can find the time. I just need to decide who wins.
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A year+ later..........................................???
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She was drunk?
She was drugged?
She purposely put herself there, having stated that she was going there with the intent to have extramarital sex.
No one shoved a funnel in her mouth and poured alcohol in so that it was swallow or drown.