So no one needs to read this lousy story. Awful writing. Dialogue supplied by a 12 year old. The style and pace of the writing just made the whole mess worse. Really, really bad.
loved it, gave you a 5 for making annony pissed off.
fuck you in the heart annony you cock sucking fag
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Anonymous09/04/15
LOL!
What's the matter Bonnie? Get up on the wrong side of the bed? Couldn't find a derelict bum willing to suck your latest gang bang out of your diseased cunt? Or just being your normal sweet self?
is all I can say. You are a pretty good writer, but no beginning, nor ending, of the drama that is their relationship. YOu have Forrest Gump aw shucks fucking her, blowing him, fucking his ass, this shoulda been in gay. No wood here, nor dramatic tension.
by
Anonymous09/06/15
Is it true?
bonnietaylor2 Was your father fag cuckold and the sperm donor was one of the bulls of your mom?
by
Anonymous09/07/15
Funny...
Ha ha.
by
Anonymous09/08/15
I see that cunt Bonny is making comments again
I gave this piece of dung a one star rating, which it deserved.
English
A good parody about bulls...
A good parody about bulls...3*
Post this garbage in GAY MALE!
So no one needs to read this lousy story. Awful writing. Dialogue supplied by a 12 year old. The style and pace of the writing just made the whole mess worse. Really, really bad.
funny story.
Stupid, but funny.
loved it, gave you a 5 for making annony pissed off.
fuck you in the heart annony you cock sucking fag
LOL!
What's the matter Bonnie? Get up on the wrong side of the bed? Couldn't find a derelict bum willing to suck your latest gang bang out of your diseased cunt? Or just being your normal sweet self?
dumb
is all I can say. You are a pretty good writer, but no beginning, nor ending, of the drama that is their relationship. YOu have Forrest Gump aw shucks fucking her, blowing him, fucking his ass, this shoulda been in gay. No wood here, nor dramatic tension.
Is it true?
bonnietaylor2 Was your father fag cuckold and the sperm donor was one of the bulls of your mom?
Funny...
Ha ha.
I see that cunt Bonny is making comments again
I gave this piece of dung a one star rating, which it deserved.
It's**
A weird read.
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