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I really enjoyed it.
Can't wait for CH. 3
GREAT STORY
I can't wait to read more of this story. I'm hooked already.
lovely story
You did good, very much enjoyed your story.
Unfortunately I have missed your previous work, so plan to go looking.
I must add, nicely rounded, definitely not fat.
Thankyou.
Really good!
i really like this story, hoping there's more!
L
Decent story, definitely worth following up with
lean writing well done
Theres no waste or false drama here, just good erotic writing and a likeable set of characters. Maybe the drama comes later, but I liked the spare detail and plain storytelling a lot. Im grateful and hope you keep the low-key tone.
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