All Comments on 'Those Things That Fall Away With Time'

To start the day!

Very nice, AH. I thought the last line was just right.

Thanks. This a was my "response poem" to a poem by Heinrich Heine, "Der Tod, das ist die kühle Nacht," and I was trying to come up with a closing line that would have the same effect as his. So I can't claim to be original here, but it is a sincere tribute.

Soothing!