All Comments on 'Artiface of Strength Ch. 04'

I both saw that coming, and didn't see that coming... Well done! I knew they would be mates, you've pretty much set that up. But the connection to Waters. I can't wait to see how you work everything out! Poor Florence.

You/ve got me hooked now!

Yep, I wondered if we would meet Liz. Keeping my eyes out for this storyline.

Well done and well written. As with others, I am hooked to this story

this was unexpected for poor Florence .

Nice twist, way to keep the story moving along and congrats on doing some thing different with the werewolf genre, it's refreshing to see good writing!

am floored. You are one of the best writers in this genre.

Looking forward to more.

Wow! The twist from hell! I figured he was either married or divorced from earlier comments. Then I figured if she was his mate then he must be divorced. I suppose he still could be. My ex still referee to herself as my wife for 8 years after our divorce. Fun story!

and she was so ready for it too, they both were, didn't see that coming and really interested in wills backstory too, some insight to why he's so conflicted working on this,

Holy shit balls, what a twist at the end .. awesome

Wow.

Excellent.