Loved the idea, and it just came together as I'd hoped. A few loose ends to tidy up in the next part. Don't know if you've written anything elsewhere, but it's so good to find something new. Please continue.
I can see the logic of a physical partnership needing to be "as one".
Excellent writing and unique approach to a problem.
I look forward to reading the solution.
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Anonymous09/06/15
Chapter 2 please
Nice, well written and a different twist. There are so many excellent places you can go with this.
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Anonymous09/07/15
Well written
This is truly a unique story and very well told. I have often wondered about the sexual aspects of dancing, figure skating and the like. I think you have told me the answer to my query without my having to pose the question. I am tghlawyer03@gmail.com
English
Novel
Loved the idea, and it just came together as I'd hoped. A few loose ends to tidy up in the next part. Don't know if you've written anything elsewhere, but it's so good to find something new. Please continue.
New slant
I can see the logic of a physical partnership needing to be "as one".
Excellent writing and unique approach to a problem.
I look forward to reading the solution.
Chapter 2 please
Nice, well written and a different twist. There are so many excellent places you can go with this.
Well written
This is truly a unique story and very well told. I have often wondered about the sexual aspects of dancing, figure skating and the like. I think you have told me the answer to my query without my having to pose the question. I am tghlawyer03@gmail.com
Nice...
Very well written. Nice to read a story that isn't just about sex, but still full of sexual suspense. Looking forward to reading more from you.
More to come...
More about this trio are coming. And, other stories too. Olivia
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