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Manufactured Bliss Ch. 01

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by Anonymous09/09/15

Advice

Word to the wise a lot of people don't want to read about homosexualiy. Most writers put a warning before the story I suggest you do the same.

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by Anonymous09/10/15

Good erotic quick read.

I enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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by thekeenreader09/11/15

:)

A really good start

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by smittensunny09/15/15

Nice

I liked your story very much. Looking forward to the next chapter...:)
Thank you.

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by Anonymous10/12/15

Loved it

Please write more, love where this story is going

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by liz33nd01/23/16

wonderful

exciting and erotic. love it and need more

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