I think this is starting to be another good story but you are doing a great disservice to your loyal readers like me as to not dedicate your talent to continue or finish your other 3 stories which I and probably many others are waiting to see progress.
I and it appears others are interested in the story of Alex and Alexa.
If you don't have a story line already in mind, might I suggest one?
It is apparent that Alex parents are swapping with another couple since they spend the night with them on occasion. Alexa shares with her sister her affair with Alex and knowing about the swapping that she, Alexa would like to fuck her husband and that Alex has shown an interest to having sex with his mother and they swap. Then the Sapphic with the two sisters to top it all off. whatdaya think?
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Anonymous09/08/15
Okayyyy..........
..........very, very nice, but I believe this fits better in another category. Dig?
And I'll echo what others have said; please hurry up with "Alex & Alexa".
Hell, I'll even almost take another "Naughty Neighbor" story. Almost.
- StanD
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Anonymous09/08/15
Another stellar delivery
You amaze me each time you post something in the incest department. Only fear I have for this story is that there will be too many outside factors to taint this beautiful relationship, like Alexas sex stories of her previous escapades or Karli being present for the whole ordeal (though the latter was a big turn on later on). If you decide to stick to a lesbian fantasy keep it that way and omit the schlong unless made from artificial materials and spent the story on their own constellation. And please for the love of god do not torture us with the daughters indecisiveness whether she should go for it or not, we already had enough that with the daddy & daughter story.
On that comparison note - hope you continue the other stories at some pony in the future and do not let our criticism put you off to start new ones and expand your literature work. You obviously have great talent and imagination so let it all run wild.
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Anonymous09/08/15
Yay, lesbian incest!
Was wondering if you'd get around to one of these stories and here we are!However, now that I've read your other stories, I'm having a hard time picturing you keeping it strictly between the mother and daughter. There are all these weirdos who comment and have temper tantrums at authors about some tiny aspect of the story falling outside the boundaries of the category chosen and whine that it be put somewhere else.
Anyways, great new premise so far, your daughter is clearly conflicted about her new naughty feelings for mom. Interesting to see if mom reciprocates.
on the Alex and Alexis plot. After the father, wife--aunt, son do their swap which is aunt-father, mother-son why not also father-son since mother and sister have already done it.
"Yay, lesbian incest!
..................There are all these weirdos who comment and have temper tantrums at authors about some tiny aspect of the story falling outside the boundaries of the category chosen and whine that it be put somewhere else."
Probably the best crafted story I have read here in a very long time.
Please consider following these two on their upcoming vacation.
Don't feel shy about having them getting some cock during their trip.. Maybe a mother/daughter team effort might work. There's no rule saying they have to be strictly lesbian.
English
awwww man
Great story. But what about Alex an Alexa pls tell me your going to write more. I've been checking back daily to see another chapter
Another great story
I think this is starting to be another good story but you are doing a great disservice to your loyal readers like me as to not dedicate your talent to continue or finish your other 3 stories which I and probably many others are waiting to see progress.
I and it appears others are interested in the story of Alex and Alexa.
If you don't have a story line already in mind, might I suggest one?
It is apparent that Alex parents are swapping with another couple since they spend the night with them on occasion. Alexa shares with her sister her affair with Alex and knowing about the swapping that she, Alexa would like to fuck her husband and that Alex has shown an interest to having sex with his mother and they swap. Then the Sapphic with the two sisters to top it all off. whatdaya think?
Okayyyy..........
..........very, very nice, but I believe this fits better in another category. Dig?
And I'll echo what others have said; please hurry up with "Alex & Alexa".
Hell, I'll even almost take another "Naughty Neighbor" story. Almost.
- StanD
Another stellar delivery
You amaze me each time you post something in the incest department. Only fear I have for this story is that there will be too many outside factors to taint this beautiful relationship, like Alexas sex stories of her previous escapades or Karli being present for the whole ordeal (though the latter was a big turn on later on). If you decide to stick to a lesbian fantasy keep it that way and omit the schlong unless made from artificial materials and spent the story on their own constellation. And please for the love of god do not torture us with the daughters indecisiveness whether she should go for it or not, we already had enough that with the daddy & daughter story.
On that comparison note - hope you continue the other stories at some pony in the future and do not let our criticism put you off to start new ones and expand your literature work. You obviously have great talent and imagination so let it all run wild.
Yay, lesbian incest!
Was wondering if you'd get around to one of these stories and here we are!However, now that I've read your other stories, I'm having a hard time picturing you keeping it strictly between the mother and daughter. There are all these weirdos who comment and have temper tantrums at authors about some tiny aspect of the story falling outside the boundaries of the category chosen and whine that it be put somewhere else.
Anyways, great new premise so far, your daughter is clearly conflicted about her new naughty feelings for mom. Interesting to see if mom reciprocates.
Another comment
on the Alex and Alexis plot. After the father, wife--aunt, son do their swap which is aunt-father, mother-son why not also father-son since mother and sister have already done it.
Loved it. Can't wait for chapter two.
OMG....
"Yay, lesbian incest!
..................There are all these weirdos who comment and have temper tantrums at authors about some tiny aspect of the story falling outside the boundaries of the category chosen and whine that it be put somewhere else."
THAT YOU, CAITHLYN?
Probably the best crafted story I have read here in a very long time.
Please consider following these two on their upcoming vacation.
Don't feel shy about having them getting some cock during their trip.. Maybe a mother/daughter team effort might work. There's no rule saying they have to be strictly lesbian.
excellent
I agree with the other commenters. Very well crafted.
Perfect pacing and very sensual. Off to a great start. 5 stars.
Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.
One of the best
Very well thought out and written
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