All Comments on 'For The Whored: The Future: Ch. 31'

I want it known, that from the start of “future” I had every intention of Lydia marrying Bryan. I had it in my head that she would fall for his constant attentions and flattery. I wanted this to be seen in the way he took her hand at first. Darguni was to fuck everything that had tits, and Bradly I had other plans for. However, Bryan kissed Bradly and it all unfolded on its own. I like it better this way. I have to say, that even in the beginning, I knew that Bryan would have an obsessive “love” over anyone he did wind up with.

I was wrong about Bryan and about him using magic but you are absolutely right about him being obsessive. I bow to a master story teller an look forward to more of your offerings.

While I do still feel sorry for everyone hurt by Bryan's actions, I can't feel much sympathy for anyone that acts as selfishly as Bryan did. This was so very well written. Bravo!

It's nice to know that Bradley learned enough from what happened to Jordan that he stopped blaming himself now that the truth is out. Can't wait to see what happens next.