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Good writer gone bad
Obviously the author has talent, unfortunately the author also has very little regard for any male who has a hint of self respect and intelligence. The women in his stories, even after fucking up everything, are portrayed as scheming bitches who give less than a shit about the men whose lives they have wrecked. They come across as only wanting back in their lives so that they can plot of ways to destroy them even worse than they did the first time. That is just sick. I have found one story by him that was decent so far, and I hope that this author either learns how to write a story where the man is not a wimp and the woman is not a soulless monster, or finds a really good psychiatrist. Perhaps both.
No willing cuckolds? At least that's what the intro says....
Are you fucking kidding with this?! I can see reconciliation under certain circumstances, maybe even with a former whore. If it's either starve to death of fuck for money, I can see it. But just because she always wanted to be a whore? I can just see her twisting on one toe with stars in her eyes "It's my dream job!" You want to be a whore? Fine, go be a whore, don't call don't write, don't visit.
U
seem to write all your main female characters as idiots with no common sense, any chance there might be an intelligent woman in your imagination? TK
still
gave u #5 keep writing ignore the negative. U provoke reaction because u make people believe your stories. It is just the subject matter that they don't like. TK
Ugh, Again!
What IS it with your heroes that they can so willingly accept being disrespected by their women?
NONE of them have the balls to say, "Go away, I never want to see you again?"
Where is this supposed to be taking place that a PROSTITUTION contract is enforceable? And she says that Jake doesn’t know her real name or where she lives; didn’t she need to show some ID before signing the contract?
And I know English isn’t your 1st language, but PLEASE, there are no spaces in contractions!
Look, a word to the wise...
... I realize that you're a RAAC man but, dude, you've got to do a better job of creating female lead characters. You can't just have them insanely stupid and obscenely despicable at the start of your stories and then become miraculously sympathetic at the end. As you should know if you read any comments, these women often appear disingenuous and completely implausible but certainly never sympathetic.
"do a better job of creating female lead characters"
This a million times over.
Kathy Was Too Stupid To Deserve Bill
I'm joining the bandwagon. You made Kathy totally despicable from the beginning. It is not that I can't accept a reconciliation story. If it is put together properly and the two main characters both show a strength of character with no more lies, deceit and stupidity and a proven desire to never cheat again...and that her desire and ambition to be a whore doesn't resurface sometime in the duration of their marriage, could be a possibility. But Kathy clearly manipulated Bill. Bill is too big of a wimp to guide the marriage and Kathy is too childish and manipulative to help Bill guide it. The marriage will be deader than last week's steak within two years. You have much room in which to improve. Two stars and that was generous.
Garbage
The absolute worst piece of garbage I have ever read.... In what universe would any man take her back???? Reconciliation is fine, if it's realistic, this is pure crap!!!!
Ok so far...
...but the pimp followed her home. He will want his pound of flesh, Standing by for part 2,
You Could Have SO Cleaned Up
In the humor section.
Always know your audience.
LOL!
You are so clearly disturbed that I'm starting to laugh at you!
Every one of your female characters are unbelievably stupid and extremely psychologically and emotionally disturbed.
They all feel the need to behave like whores or actually be whores while shitting on apparently wonderful men that they profess to love.
Keep it in the humor section or give more background on the extreme nature of how these women became so disturbed and more aftermath and repercussions for their extremely evil actions.
The woman in this story would not be a fit wife and mother until completing years of counseling and therapy.
It would be like a seemingly nice man going out to suddenly became a serial rapist or murderer.
Funny stories though.
Mixed feelings
I love a good redemption story but damn that felt like he gave in easily after all that she did.
Something Lost in Transition
The story was moving right along, and then as if by magic, it ended with them being back together again and having a child. Weird.
Pure garbage
Wow.... This may be the biggest pile of shit from another Euro wimp writer......
Bill is an idiot
Bill is an idiot who take that whore back after first throw her out from the house and even throw out all the things. Personally I would never ever take a woman back who actually become a dirty whore. I rather stay single rest of my life and wank my self to sleep. Relationship is like a beautiful vase. If you drop the vase and it goes in 1000 bits then you can glue it together again easy but you will always rest of your life know that the wase is damaged and it will always come bak to you. One way or another.
If I kick out some woman from my house .. that is it and she can never come back.
Not even if I am horny as hell. No way in hell. Always better with fresh water then dirty one.
Five stars! For this one, a little more for writing in a foreign tongue than the plot.
This plot was a little harder to accept than others you've written, but the author's comment on 10/18/15 that he had a confession to make, after he presumably had read the first page of comments, was just superb. It's too bad we're using electrons instead of marble for stev2244's writings!
You tried to fool us by Making a change!
You really tried to making a short story into a three page epic, really! When she first told him what she wanted to do and left the house. The story should have ended but, only he allowed her back into his living space. I can only guess he wanted to have someone to control for making that poor of a choice. She would do anything to come back home. He loved the control and power that gave him.
To say this is a story about reconciliation is not correct, its a story about control.
You see them everywhere men who want control in a sneaky way. He's too chicken to fight wIth her for fear of getting his ass kicked. He tries to and often succeeds in giving the outside world a view that he's almost good as good can get.
His women are flawed stupid, can't keep their legs closed and needs him to save her. He doesn't want the woman to have a job that pays the same or more than him. He's also afraid to meet a strong smart woman who can help if the need arises because people might think she's as smart or smarter than him. What do we get to read about, stupid shallow people who can't get out of their own way. Most of the stories are about this type of person, who for whatever covers about 85% of the problem people in your stories.
You really need to see a shrink...
... for even coming up with shit at depraved as this. I wouldn't wish the kind of reconciliations you write on people I hate. 1*
I wonder about you
Your stories are of wives who are very stupid to just plain dumb! I've tried to accept your stories but,this one is completely at the limit. Never would he allow her to return as his wife. After her flaw logic to leave home and his allowing that to happen. He was dumb to even accept her logic no matter what was said he knew it was wrong . Writer you knew it was wrong to supply that choice. She'd have to go to others for further help, yes he would help her not get hurt by the pimps but to have children with her?........three stars max leaning towards a two!
Ugh
It wasn’t as she expected? Didn’t it occur to her to talk to the other whores first?
Dumb Cuck!
WTF?!!!
How can he even consider taking the twat back after she left to become a whore?!Damn,she just shit all over their engagement/relationship to live her childhood dream of being a whore house prostitute? Sick! Sick! Sick!
a week and she's clean get real, 3 mos a year, yeah she should be clean
3* good story with a stupid woman, and weak minded man and unrealistic talk of STDs
Dumb Shit(s)
He should of just packed his things into his car and left, right after she left to go to the "Club".
I couldn't finish this.
It's just too ridiculous. The author already warned us that it's a reconciliation story. Now I'm all for reconciliation when it's done well but this is not written very well and truthfully, the premise of the story is laughable.
I gave two stars for the effort but the best I can do.
Stupid
There is not one damn man on this Earth that would take a woman back to f*** 63 guys in a week this story is so damn ridiculous it's pitiful
Yeah, utter crap...
She had a fantasy from when she was younger of being a whore...? Because there are SO many books and movies about how glamorous it is, huh...?
Hey, here's a surprise - I bet most guys have fantasies about fucking lots of women... Is he going for his fantasy next...?
Or better yet, I think it's a safe bet he DID have a fantasy about marrying someone who WASN'T and never HAD been a whore... odd that he didn't follow THAT fantasy.
Funny that you'd think a guy would only try dating a handful of women before giving up and settling for a cheating whore...
I don't know who that would make the more stupid of the two - you or him. Or maybe you thought us...?
yuck!!!
Your worst fairytale fantasy land story so far. He didn't even asked her for STDs tests. Maybe in fantasy land they are not needed. What man would take a woman back after what she did. You are really testing the limits fantasy here.
Minus 10*
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