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by Anonymous

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by hansbwl09/07/15

Very good story

Well told and with a human touch you seldom see on these pages! 5*

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by elling5009/07/15

Beautiful

Wonderful loving story. Wellington tolv.

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by mel_pomene09/07/15

A lovely story

It's so nice to have a full-on romantic story like this on these pages. Thank you so much for sharing it with us, and please write more like it.

Very, very well done -- five stars and again, my thanks.

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by Anonymous09/07/15

Unqualified 5 stars

A mature story in every sense of the word. This is just really, really good. Nothing quite like it on the whole site.

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by Anonymous09/07/15

Agreement

Must be something about age and the ability to enjoy and empathize with an all to familiar situations of loss and recovery. Young love is all fine and nice, But too often like a nova - burns too hot and then just becomes a black hole, Wisdom dose come with age and experience, And with that wisdom maybe an appreciation that love is more than just a hard-on and mindless body on body combat.

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by Anonymous09/08/15

Wonderful

Thank you. Really....

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by Anonymous09/08/15

The story rates a five, but …

please check the date of your second flashback; it pre-dates the first.

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by Alwaysraining09/08/15

Superb

First time I've come across your work. I'll certainly read more. Thank you.

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by JayDavid09/08/15

Thanks

For all of the nice comments. I'm fixing the date issue.

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by arrowglass09/10/15

Enjoyed this...seemed so real!

Like your writing style!

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by JayDavid09/10/15

Continued thanks, and

I've fixed the flashback date issue raised earlier. I appreciate the positive comments, and hope you check out and enjoy my other stories.

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by Anonymous09/10/15

Sounds like Vanessa was disappointed that David was with a new women.

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by rightbank09/10/15

If you read my diary

you would find a companion story.
thanks for the memories.

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by liquid_yellow09/12/15

Very touching story. Makes me wonder what I've missed at all of my own reunions

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by maddict09/13/15

If I were to be so lucky..?

Nice story. San diego is ahead of Detroit. Trying to multi task. Forget about it. Good luck for summer story contest, is Literotic a rockin or what.
O like this story.

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by Anonymous09/14/15

Princeton life

Sounds like Princeton folks' lives were more fun both as undergraduates and at reunions than ours . . .

(Harvard grad)

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