All Comments on 'Get Noticed in 1,000 Words or Less'

NIce little quick hit, but enough to showcase your talent.

Love the story! Great writing

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Congratulations on experimenting with flash fiction! Now could you please write a good Exhibitionist/Voyeur story next? 1 Star for wasting my time to showcase your "talent."

Cranking out a quickie that includes all the necessary parts to qualify it as erotic literature is an art form. The way you painted your "first portrait" was good enough to have it hanging in The Met...or perhaps even The Louvre. Great job and best wishes in the contest.

Made me laugh. And cringe.

Loved it!

Short and sweet. I got goosebumps, a grin and a boner out of your thousand words. A pretty good haul.

I have to wonder what her reaction would have been if that bottle-nosed dolphin had poked her in the area that bikini bottom had abandoned...? Talk about a SQUEAL! Bet you could have heard her all the way to Denver!