I did not sit considering my options for that subject line long, but came back to it over and over. This was a smoothly written piece of adult literature. Well done.
This was the first bit of writing you have done which made me curious about reading it. It was just something about the title. I enjoyed you allowing my sexual experiences to fill in the mechanics of sex which lesser writers feel must be dictated blow by excruciatingly wordy blow.
SR71plt - you would please your fan base to allow yourself to broaden from your usually gay-themed stories to the incest category. You are a master of erotic writing.
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Anonymous09/08/15
Was really good, deserves another chapter.
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Anonymous09/08/15
WOW
Great start. If you do not already have ideas for the next chapter have you thought about playing around with what Keith knew and when?
It is the age of Google after all, he could have seen Cindy's photo on the web site of the dental surgery she works at.
Would be fun to turn Cindy on her head, her expecting to be the one in the know and for Keith to freak out, then for him to reveal he knew who she was before he appraoched her in the cafe. Love at first sight.
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I did not sit considering my options for that subject line long, but came back to it over and over. This was a smoothly written piece of adult literature. Well done.
This was the first bit of writing you have done which made me curious about reading it. It was just something about the title. I enjoyed you allowing my sexual experiences to fill in the mechanics of sex which lesser writers feel must be dictated blow by excruciatingly wordy blow.
Excellent style and I hope you continue.
A quite little masterpiece
SR71plt - you would please your fan base to allow yourself to broaden from your usually gay-themed stories to the incest category. You are a master of erotic writing.
Was really good, deserves another chapter.
WOW
Great start. If you do not already have ideas for the next chapter have you thought about playing around with what Keith knew and when?
It is the age of Google after all, he could have seen Cindy's photo on the web site of the dental surgery she works at.
Would be fun to turn Cindy on her head, her expecting to be the one in the know and for Keith to freak out, then for him to reveal he knew who she was before he appraoched her in the cafe. Love at first sight.
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