too short of a story.. you start to get into it and it ends.. not a fan of one pagers.
I gave it a 3 cause i liked it but it was to short for higher and seemed rushed
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Anonymous02/20/16
We want more!
We want more! We want more!
But a bit longer this time please, and try adding a bit more of their life in it, other that 12 hours a day of sex , both for guy and gals. Oh and try adding the perspective of gals in it also, it will definitely be a 5+starter, 'cause I already gave ya 5 :)
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too short of a story.. you start to get into it and it ends.. not a fan of one pagers.
I gave it a 3 cause i liked it but it was to short for higher and seemed rushed
We want more!
We want more! We want more!
But a bit longer this time please, and try adding a bit more of their life in it, other that 12 hours a day of sex , both for guy and gals. Oh and try adding the perspective of gals in it also, it will definitely be a 5+starter, 'cause I already gave ya 5 :)
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