Bathed in Sun, Naked Sister

Good read well done

Yes, very arousing and a great story ! Hopefully, brother and sister continue to play and she will teach him. Maybe, Jeff will get a small role with the modeling company !! I hope Maggie screws him daily and they get very hot for each other all the time. Thank you.

loved it

My cock was hard the entire story. I saved to read again later.

Love the story

I think this story needs to continue and Jeff needs more reward than one blow job and one fuck, after all if not for his participation she would not have gotten the job.

life

what some will do for money. good tale not badly written. you did not get carried
away with size thing like so many other writers do. her grip is something any women
can learn to do if she wants to. if there is a part two maybe he can learn to eat his honey.

Sunburned

Extremely hot. Looking for part 2.

More please !

You need to move the story on to her new job - where she is asked to do another photo shoot with her 'boyfriend'.

Don't be too long in writing it - please !

Very hot

A hot start to a sexy story. The SF crew is very liberated, so there should be all kinds of debauchery there. Please, please get a proofreader. The spelling mistakes were very jarring.

Hot but one sided.

I liked this a lot but I had one quibble. The brother is pretty much a robot. The story would work better if he was either more eager or more reluctant or even both; hornier but more unwilling to break taboo. Also do the siblings resemble each other? It would double the heat if the photographer or the designer guessed they were shooting incest. Lots of room for a second story there.

MORE

It's a great story as far as it goes. I would love to find out where their relationship grows from here.

Another classic

You are so good at this

Rare talent

I found your story quite believable and the tiny errors in grammar are of no consequence. I do hope you have a follow up to this?

The Good and the Bad

Some say you're good, but I say you're bad! So bad that you're good! Delicious erotica.

damn

Sexy as hell great way to masturbate.

Damn

I loved this one ... Awesome dude ...

Virgin No More

Terrific reading and the buildup was excellent. Worthy of five stars.

It is a 5 * story

This story is one that could be so true I believe, that I can just see it happening like that, if a sibiling is wanting the job bad enough to do what ever it takes, to land the job. I had to give it 5*s, it was so good.

Fantastic!

You did a great job setting the scene, and I loved the initial banter between Maggie and Jeff. I also thought Jeff's trepidation with what Maggie first proposed added a nice touch of realism to the story.

Wow

Now that was sooooooooo fucking hot, they were very lucky to get what they both wanted

Unbelievable!!!!

Beautifully written, you started the story of so innocently, the really revved things up from the innocent beach sunbathing to the slow build up to the fantastic finish for Jeff and Maggie was well and truly happy with the way the "AUDITIONS" went, so then they were both very happy.

Well written

Not a big fan of incest but I will give you extreme credit for believable story telling.

Just excellent - as always !

It's just a shame you never write a sequel to any of your stories, a real shame !

But this still gets 5 Stars from me.

hot

this is the second I have read this and it is real turn on, he is a caring brother and is rewarded