All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great story

Hurry and submit more chapters!! Awesome story!! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
hot

great story !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
You b@%%$Y tease

When is the next chapter arriving?

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Nice work

More chapters soon please!

CandiceCandy2001CandiceCandy2001over 20 years ago
Im sticking to my seat

I feel so sorry for Ron. But I'm jealous of Amy, because that boy is gonnna give her one hell of a ride

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Keep it up

Good Stuff! The story is shaping up as one of the best I have read on this site. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
more please

Great story... give us all a Christmas present and post more chapters!!!

MG40MG40about 20 years ago
GREAT

Best Story I've read in a long time....all parts of it.

Steve OrshonSteve Orshonover 18 years ago
Smokin'

This is the first I've had a chance to read JackKing, and he has immediately become one of my favorites. This is one very hot and professionally written story. I'm envious of your abilities and in awe of your twisted plans. I like nothing more than a sexy, believeable story and you have provided both. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic

This is definietly one of the best stories I have ever read on here.

vikingsiddhuvikingsiddhuabout 12 years ago
wicked!!!!

that beth is truly wicked...i hope in some future episode she really gets it from ron for being such a cock tease...!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I really liked the fantasies

Pam and Amy's fantasies were so well written... Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent

This part was hilarious, tintilating, and just out and out fun. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
PRICK TEASER

I hope Ron gets Beth literaly panting for his cock, and then leaves her hanging. I hate cock teases like her totureing guy's and then humiliating them about it. She deserves a real good slap.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 2 years ago

So much seriously naughty stuff going on at once! Good job keeping it all straight and readable.

On to the next chapter! ;->

AngusMAngusMover 1 year ago

I thoroughly detest women like Beth

greywolf12greywolf129 months ago

Wow, superb! You have so much hot ideas for erotic situations!

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