All Comments on 'Oh Baby! What a Sitter! Pt. 03'

I would love to read another chapter of this story.

As the other Commenter said I'd love to read another chapter in this story, a wedding would be nice, maybe even pregnancy from their love child

Yes yes yes this needs to continue.

What was that about Kelly's meal being less robust and no garlic. She's not pregnant already is she?

Oh yes please continue this tale at least for an episode or 2 more.

Thank you.

Cant wait for the next chapter

I really like this story ... Please continue.

Very good character development. I appreciated the humor too. Just a word of caution, a good author (and you are) will always leave the reader wanting more. Thank you for an enjoyable time.

Please continue !

This is a 5 star series!

More chapters, please

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Please, please, at least one more chapter! We need the ring, the wedding, maybe a new baby--in short, "happily ever after". (OK, I'll admit it: I'm an incurable romantic!). You are an excellent storyteller, and this is one of your best efforts. Thank you for sharing. Now, more, please!

I don't comment ever, but I thought I'd let you know I deeply enjoyed your story and hope you continue it.

Another chapter, or more, would definitely be required to do justice to your creation of new-found love. Please continue with this story line but don't forget your other wonderful stories either.

love the stories of this couple, please continue. It's a beautiful story!

No one leaves the story three quarters of the way done. I hope the heck you finish

BEST STORY SERIES I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME!!!! no kinky (well not much) not cheating, no sharing, VERY loving!!!

My god what a story! Just let us know after the wedding , etc!

Great read, one of the best I have read over the years! Would like this story to continue!!

Very loving Story would most definitely like to read more.

Abso-freakin-lutely! Love and commitment don't stop the hot sex and romance. You might need to bring in additional characters and set up some longer-term issues (job changes, Tony-like sideKICKs, etc.), but you've got two amiable lovers in the palm of your hand -- I mean, under your keyboarding fingers. :)

Amazing story! Next instalment ASAP please!

Great work on all of the installments. Please keep it up and write more.

I hope you do not take this in a different direction ( other partners, Bondage etc...)

You've done something that many published authors can't do, You've created a whole host of characters that come across as very real and you don't "write them into a corner" at the end of the story/chapter. This sets this up as a series that can go on as long as your imagination allows.

Damn good job all around.

needs at least one more chapter. They need to get married and have a honeymoon, maybe somewhere away. Leave Lynn a with grandma and grandpa and they can have a week to themselves. And maybe it will leave them with a new little one on the way.

Can't wait for the next chapter

I can foresee many more chapters for this story! You could take us all the way their potential families finding their way into College. I am going to check back for some additional chapters on a regular basis.

The fact

So, the good news, excellent story. I loved it. It strikes right where my heart is located and what I try to achieve when I write. I can't wait for the wrap up, though I think that is fairly close.

The bad news. Yes but just a little. I calculated in my head. He was 18 when she was 12 that is only 6 years difference. I don't see that as a significant amount. But in the story you make it sound like a big deal for a while.

That is the only negative thing I found in the story and I rated you a five. Good job. I loved it.

More, please.

This IS, not HAS to be one of the best, if not THE best Love story I have ever read....

And I am 83 years old. Please continue. There is much more to tell...

Please continue this outstanding story!

After reading all three chapters back to back one thing is clear....There is definitely more left to this story! Five stars all the way!!

Still more to tell. One of the best stories I've read on this site. Five stars from me. Nicely done man. Nicely done!!

I started reading your submissions a couple of days ago. I've started at the top and worked my way down this far and fully intend to finish everything you have. I've five starred and favorited most of them. Also favorited you as an author. Of those I didn't rate highly or favorite, they just weren't my cup of tea, but the overall delivery is superb. Thank you for your time, your dedication and I hope that others agree with me when I say, "DON'T YOU DARE EVER EVER EVER EVER STOP!" Have a great day!

Too much sex and not enough story and plot.

Yes, please continue! I've read all 3 parts straight and they are so good and there is still so much to tell with them. You have the perfect balance of plot and sex. Please write more, I'm looking forward to continue reading this couple's story.

YES, they do have plenty of life left for this story... wonderful story line and wonderful outcomes... Keep it up!!!!

You've kind of touched on both and it would certainly be a big step but a welcome one I think

Loved the story so far.

Two small word errors in this chapter:

1) If Todd is living and working in the U.S., he'd be eating steak and shrimp, not steak and prawns. "Prawns" are the Queen's English, not American English for those delicious lil' critters. Or you could just call the dish "surf 'n' turf" garlic pasta.

2) Monarchs have "reigns". Horses have "reins".

The "defense" of Kelly was a bit of a stretch. The QB was there with three buddies when Todd entered the bar. Can't imagine they'd so thoroughly disappear from the action, when Todd threatened their leader. That's just not the way jock culture works. They're like a wolf pack. Threaten one, you threaten them all. Also, did the bar not have bouncers to handle sexual assaults and fights occurring on the property? I've never seen a college bar that didn't have at least two huge bruisers to keep the peace. Lastly on this topic, there's no record of Kelly's assault, but Todd is on video assaulting the QB, which leaves him wide open to charges being pressed against him. Any confession the QB made was clearly physically coerced and therefore invalid for Todd's defense.

One other thing that puzzles me, when it came to telling Kelly's parents about their relationship, you act as though her parents live in another state or something, while Todd's parents live nearby, but in the first chapter, you said they got together for "the occasional backyard barbecue, both at our house, and their little farm about an hour away." If Todd's parents still live nearby and Kelly's parents are still on the farm, why wouldn't Kelly's parents still be only about an hour away? It's only seven years later, and if it was easy enough to get together for barbecues in the past, it certainly would be still an easy trip to deliver such momentous announcements.

You definitely have to get them wed. You might have Kelly "give up the butt" on their wedding night. I'd skip any additional sex partners though and keep the story strictly about Todd and Kelly. It's a love story about two people and not just a sex story. Why would they have resisted others (mostly Todd) for this long only to turn around and become swingers in the end?

Speaking of resisting others...if Todd was the boss, why wouldn't he have just told Adrienne from the get-go that he had a loving partner at home and she should back off. He wasn't much of a boss, if he couldn't--or wouldn't--do that. With all the sex supposedly going on there between people in authority and their underlings, that office is ripe for sexual harassment suits at some point in the future.

Ah, but I'm nitpicking. It is truly a wonderful story that deserves a wonderful conclusion to it.

The one sad note about this story is that, with Kelly coming into Lynn's life at two-years of age, most likely Lynn will never have any recollection of her birth mother, Amy. For all intents and purposes, Kelly will be the only mother she ever knows.

I'm looking forward to at least one more chapter.

I've been reading on this site for a couple years now and this is the first time I have decided to comment. I've found other stories that I've liked, but I needed to say I agree that this story should go on!

The story line has been excellent. The sex scenes are mouth watering and I think there's been a nice variety of content in between the sex to keep readers interested. My one piece of negative criticism is that a lot of times it seems at points like revealing the relationship to their parents or Kelly's progression in her martial arts class go a little too positively to be believable some times. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that I think those events should have ended differently, but maybe they could experience a little more difficulty out resistance along the way.

If Kelly is only 19 still by this point, I think there is plenty of potential for the story to continue. Especially after the ending to this chapter of the story.

More!

fantastic story my friend. I've been hard through all three stories. you should build on the anal you mentioned in the previous arc, I've been anticipating that a little bit.

At least 10 more chapters. Maybe 100

Please, keep going. I love everything about these characters and this story line! Very good! Can't wait for more!

Best story I've read. Please, more!!

Speaking as a guy who has seen it many times in the past I applaud what Todd did to that jerk football player. Not all of them are jerks but enough think they are so far above a mortal man that any woman should just fall into their arms gladly.

Bravo a bitch

Can anyone translate that last anonymous comment? WTF?

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Author here

Can anyone translate that last anonymous comment? WTF?

Best guess?

An insult in reply to the comment before (for no reason I can see).

Not much to add. You have things pretty well covered.

It's hot, erotic where it needs to be, strong yet maturely soft spoken when Kool Hand Like is the better choice of action ... and respectful of family and age differences. A great read and with good timing to make an easy read. Kudos

Please, please, keep this story going. Hell, even after they get married, this story can live a very long time

I loved the story until the last part where she asked him to marry her. I didn't like that part.

At least the author brought in the parents. The rest is overambitious masturbation - sorry. (I've actually taken to skipping/ speed reading the sex scenes - it is monotonous rehashing of already written tripe - the author probably did a copy/paste on them)

Smoke

Well, at least the previous commenter left his name. I might suggest rather than speed reading, you just skip it all together, or better yet, read one of your own stories, since you know everything. What? You don't write? Other than to hear yourself speak, of course.

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, of course, but this is hardly constructive criticism. Trolls will be trolls.

I have never felt the need to leave a comment on a story, but on this one I do. This is the best erotica I have ever read, and I've read my fair share. I love how it's not all about the sex, there's also a wonderful story going on and it goes into that. There's no, "They had dinner... then fucked." It includes the dinner conversations and it goes so much deeper than practically everything else on this site. Can't wait to read more, keep writing!

Your are a great writer! I was drawn into the love aspects of this story. This is one of those feel good stories that has sex to boot. I have started at the top of your story list, looking forward to reading more of your work. Not sure which story brought you to my attention, but am glad I have many more to read. People like you who inspire me ( strictly amatuer writer with no skills) to better my stories and add depth to them. To the haters: Thousands of other stories, read something else if this isnt your cup of tea!

She moves in, assumes the role of caregiver and home maker, he plods along unaware. All we know about them as a couple is in the bedroom. She is in school, but we know nothing about it. He is back from Toledo working at home, but it never enters the Conversation. They watch TV and go to bed.

No wonder she proposed.

nice to read a love story

This story demonstrates that

Your moniker is correct.

Paul in Oklahoma

Aww man you can't do this to us, leave us high. Damn I want the wedding Please.

Give us more......maybe married, pregnant and lactating.......oh my...

Would have liked to know what happened the next day at school after he sorted Brad out.Also this story is getting too long with all the repetitive sex scenes,we knew after CH 1 they were in love.

I hate that you ruined an otherwise great story by suddenly making him a karate-expert...

I’m gonna assume you are dramatically overestimating the number of incredibly sexy women living in Toledo

To Anoymous who thinks the story was "ruined":

Why would him knowing a few simple moves that would let him get a arm lock hold on an arrogant, half-drunk college kid who was expecting to just intimidate the 26-year-old "old guy", mean he's an "expert"?

Half the guys I trained with in the military (none of them Special Operations or the like) could have done the same thing if their opponent was dumb enough to just grab their shoulder and make a harrassing remark.

It's covered in the first day in hand-to-hand combat training.

Great story.

OH GOD YES, THEY HAVE TO CONTINUE AND HAVE THREE MORE CHILDREN!

Wonderful series and she's a beautiful wife. Just ask Lynn, mommy's sidekick and love of her life! Please continue this wonderful series

Oh man, what a lovely Romance story...!

Fuck yes. More!!

Sounds like his wife needs a baby and their daughter Lynn needs a brother or sister. So WONDERFUL!!

Saying that it's not the 1950's any more is a completely immature thing to say in regards to the well-being of the "mother" of your children. However, it is a mistake a 26yr old male would likely make who is trying to give a good life to the "mother" of his child. When you are a parent your social activities have to be in sync with your parental duties. Take it from a guy who's collegiate duty also included strollering their daughter to university when their wife was sick.

The story just seems to get better with each new chapter. 5/5

Very nice writing. I, for one, am happy that the sexy scenes are balanced out with a well developed romance. Sex is never better than with a person you truly love.

One constructively intended comment: a swampy snatch and that sort of language is fine between lovers mutually enjoying role play.

But when a male writer, who also happens to be the story's hero, uses it to describe the love of his life, it sounds derogatory. More like something the asshole quarterback would utter.

Maybe it's just me, but i liked the 'pretty kitty' or the 'welcoming warm folds' better. I know, it's a fine line sometimes, bit you seem like someone who wouldn't have trouble navigating it.

Anyway, still 5*, and only because there aren't any more available. Tx!!

This installment got pretty silly. Knowing a few moves doesn't make up for a lack of athleticism. I've got 8 years of combat sports. JJ Watt would wax my shit. In a protracted war or something I'd take 1000 of me vs 1000 of him. I'm smarter I could pick the battleground and tactics could come into play, plus guns work miracles, if you can call it that.

I digress, this installment falls victim to like a hyper regressive standing up for your woman while also not wanting to constrain her like a good progressive and having super unrealistic fight scenes. The odds your woman goes out and gets SA'd by a college QB and doesn't want it in the first place are astronomically low. Like it's more likely you get struck by lightning. I'd break up if a girl told me that, because at minimum she has put herself in unwise situations, likely against my council, and at maximum has cheated on me and is gaslighting me to maintain both relationships. On the off chance you convince me it's SA I'm not going to then "defend your honor" by picking a fight with this dude. We're working on system buy in from you where you don't ignore my advice.

A very sweet story…

Thank you for sharing,

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Sorry I am unable to be more generous.

That scumbag Brad deserves to have his arm destroyed. Fair is fair. He was willing to do at least as much damage to his victims. You reap what you sow. He got off all too lightly - sadly this occurs all too frequently in these stories and in real life, so at least it's realistic in that sense.

I thought Kelly's proposal during the climax of their lovemaking was sweet and romantic. She's really in love with him and adores his daughter. Happy ending please :)

HUZZAH! What a wonderful couple and story! And putting that jock turd in his place had me laughing my ass off. MORE, MORE!

Oh hell yes!! Continue with this hot hot tale! What a lucky man. What a lucky woman! Lucky cock here getting massaged so well and frequently while reading this.

And I totally love how he handled the asshole in the bar. This is a too common problem, with our schools turning a blind eye to this type of behavior. The mores of our society make sexual assault into something of a joke, and leads to a rape culture that often blames the victim more often than not, while slapping the hands of perpetrators. Exposing him to everyone for the shithead he is will hopefully let others know that this is not acceptable and shouldn't be tolerated.

Oh boy, Mommy's gonna give her baby a sibling. If you don't think Lynn is her baby, try hurting her, and mama bear will protect HER baby!