All Comments on 'Out of Control'

Please continue!!

Damn... This was so good.

Want more please, damn it made me wet!!

There are only a few on this site that I will read in a flash bc I know their stories are guaranteed to be that good; Avgblkgrl is one. Thanks!

Loving Carter.

Very nice work, you are not an average writer. Look foward to more.

This was so good. You never fail to bring the goods.

Love it you always write good stories

More!!!

LOOOOOOVE YOUR WORK!!!

Fuuuucccckkk that was hot!

You always make my fantasies come to life! To be out of control just once! 5 stars!

I sure hope so! Excellent as usual. 5 stars!

Please write more!

Where is the next chapter?

Ok, we need more chapters to this story!! It's so good...you are so talented. I've been reading through all your stories and they all could be the beginning of actual books that I'd gladly buy. So please add some more chapters to this story and some of the others!!! So good, love it!!

This was one of the best chapters I have read in soon long on this site!! I'm saying chapter because I hope there is more. The chemistry between them came off as so natural and playful. You should definitely turn this into a full length story. I would read it twice!!

this is amazing

-.-" i am starting to hate one shots though, stories that are great but leaves you hanging wanting more should be illegal!!!!

Please let there be several chapters..... or at least let us know how stretched she was by his pierced dick....

This piece was white hot and all the things hot stories can be: teasing, revealing awarenesses the reader would not know, and in this case, making me feel so right that I am turned on by Sistas with all the right stuff. You are gorgeous I am certain, as no ordinary woman could write this. It is too accurate......and I loved it!

Loved it and I also love the fact that my name is in it very cool. Hope you add more to this story

oh my god I love the way you write. you are a goddess.

That can not be the end! It was just so hot and the writing was so amazing. I love the characters and the entire scene 😍