All Comments on 'Twisted by Twisters'

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elusiouselusiousover 8 years ago

Love it! :) I hope you'll add more soon.

HeisenhugHeisenhugover 8 years ago
I can just picture it now...

"the radar is tracking the tornado moving east, away from us."

"tell that to the tornado, it's definitely moving west and straight for us!"

"shiiiit!"

Lmao. Nice story, short but sweet.

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 8 years ago
A pleasure

It was such a pleasure to read a story about a stable couple that have been together for years. I guess I mean it was great to read one without the usual relationship drama. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing short piece

Like somebody else mentioned it's lovely to read a story about a stable couple without the usual drama. Please add more to this piece because it was amazing and I'd like to see how Steph makes it up to her wife. Please

Sluts4usSluts4usover 8 years ago

A good story without the the unecessary drama. Would love to read more.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Great little story. Can't wait to read more

MaonaighMaonaighover 8 years ago
Most interesting

I've read some damned good stories on this site (as well as many clunkers) but I think this is one of the most interesting, mainly because of the background story. It was clever of you to use storms and storm-chasing for your backdrop---it was something really off-beat to capture the reader's attention from the word go. And the near-lack of sex rather than an overdose of it was in itself strangely erotic. My one criticism is that the story wasn't quite long enough. Still, perhaps you'll add a sequel at a later date.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
Wow!

This story packs a wallop in a short amount of time! Please continue this! Thank you!

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