Really like the whole "We need to talk" series. All well written, short and to the point. Most with a really clever twist. This one is great. Keep them coming. Hope you can continue finding additional topics / scenes to continue. 5 stars and thanks for posting.
But the issue I have is why would he be happy to be rid of his wife? Before she told him that she was cheating was the marriage bad? While I like quick hitters the one problem is that without more background we have no understanding of the circumstances leading up to the story. Still an okay story. I wonder what will happen when her solicitor says she was lying about her lover and was just lashing out at her husbands perceived cheating? Since he has no proof (and even a British Court would require more proof than a single I-phone recording) I wonder if they divorce and she got half? I wonder if she hired a PI and caught him in the act, had video proof, and she got MORE than half? So many questions. Maybe next time a longer story?
I fived it because it was silly, easy, and fun, but like OvertheFalls I felt a little squeamish about the marriage. He seemed to be happy. Didn't the discovery upset him at all?
love this story as it shows how some people can get all mixed up in what was said and what really happened. and it looks like she got what she really wanted in the end, no marriage
I know some people get tired of wives fucking up by going overboard with the revenge thing or the justification of their own cheating, but I can't help but enjoy them because almost every author that writes one of these twists the knife of irony in the slut's heart until she bleeds out.
Having been involved and watching more than a few interrogations, most guilty people will talk themselves into trouble or even more trouble than not.... Hence the fifth amendment here in the US!
English
Thanks***
For the read.
Enjoyed it
a funny flash. Thanks.
Nice
Funny little tale. Cheaters will never learn.
Funny and to the point....
Funny and to the point....And he thought: "Free at last"...3*
Short sweet & funny as hell
Thanks for the laugh!
Like The Whole Series
Really like the whole "We need to talk" series. All well written, short and to the point. Most with a really clever twist. This one is great. Keep them coming. Hope you can continue finding additional topics / scenes to continue. 5 stars and thanks for posting.
IF YOU ARE NOT SURE
dont speak out and remove the doubt. TK U MLJ LV NV
LONNIE DONEGAN WAS RIGHT IN HIS SONG ROCK ISLAND LINE
in the words "I fooled you" TK U MLJ LV NV
LOL
Someone got squashed...pun intended :)
Very nice
5*
Oops
Excellent, as usual, 5*
Well he'll be rid of her soon.
But the issue I have is why would he be happy to be rid of his wife? Before she told him that she was cheating was the marriage bad? While I like quick hitters the one problem is that without more background we have no understanding of the circumstances leading up to the story. Still an okay story. I wonder what will happen when her solicitor says she was lying about her lover and was just lashing out at her husbands perceived cheating? Since he has no proof (and even a British Court would require more proof than a single I-phone recording) I wonder if they divorce and she got half? I wonder if she hired a PI and caught him in the act, had video proof, and she got MORE than half? So many questions. Maybe next time a longer story?
OK...
I fived it because it was silly, easy, and fun, but like OvertheFalls I felt a little squeamish about the marriage. He seemed to be happy. Didn't the discovery upset him at all?
Don't over think things
Nice story, well advertised. Apparently the marriage was on the rocks for a while, now it's settled to the bottom.
Chilley
The dreaded words...
"We need to talk" This was hilarious, how wifey unknowingly confessed to her own cheating, while the husband was innocent. Good snapshot story! 5 *'s
such a strong statement in so few words
love this story as it shows how some people can get all mixed up in what was said and what really happened. and it looks like she got what she really wanted in the end, no marriage
Another perfect drive-by-story!
You have these down to a fine art. Throughly enjoyed this one. Thx
Five stars - fun little flash story
Nice twist with the Angela's. One of this author's smoother rides.
Thanks!
Another little gem.
LOL!!!
I know some people get tired of wives fucking up by going overboard with the revenge thing or the justification of their own cheating, but I can't help but enjoy them because almost every author that writes one of these twists the knife of irony in the slut's heart until she bleeds out.
sounds like a variation
on the "whisper" game. by the time you get all the way around the circle what the last person heard is not what the first person said.
thanks for the smile.
Thanks*****
For the read.
Lots of Fun
5 stars from someone who enjoyed squash in my youth.
Dont you just love it
When some little cunt gets the legs cut off from under her. Take the bitch to the cleaners and then kick her skank penniless arse into the curb.
Keep em comming Britease
Nicely done
Having been involved and watching more than a few interrogations, most guilty people will talk themselves into trouble or even more trouble than not.... Hence the fifth amendment here in the US!
GIVE EM" THE ROPE
and let em" tie their own noose, TK U MLJ LV NV
Lol that was funny
Nuff said!
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