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but I'd consider dropping the last ten lines

Dear Anonymous,

you want the 'fall' without the 'love'?

It's not as hard this way, I doubt it would make its way to become a poem!

The poem brings out the yearning, the need to be close and be one with the other. The smelting of two souls, cocooned in their own world. A nice thought. The complete sexual immersion, awash in the deep recesses of our bodies. Would that be what one calls absolute love? Perhaps.

beautiful....