Not that the example in the story was too short, the story itself was too short.
It was well written, with a good backstory foundation on which to expand.
I love the premise that an open, blatant aproach is most effective for him to become a motherfucker. Worked for me.
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Anonymous09/11/15
some readers are real assholes
RNB is a first time contributor. He's given us a charming and hot little vignette, and some jerk feels the need to trash this promising writer and his work. Please, dear author, ignore idiots like that. This well-written story concerns a very common fantasy of young males. Countless boys have lain naked on top of the bedsheets, with their young penis rock hard, pretending to be asleep and hoping that their mother would peek in to see that everything was okay--and get a real good look at their big fat cock. "Show it hard for mom," boys jokingly tell each other. Lots of readers will remember standing in their room wearing maybe just a T-shirt, on the chance that mom would come in and see everything they've got hanging between their legs--and, the fantasy goes, be damn impressed. It's only natural. Look, a young guy is proud of what makes him a guy, and his mother is probably still the most important person in the world to him. Like 19 year old Josh in this fine story, he wants her to validate him as a male. If he's as lucky as Josh, mom will take his young penis in hand, ooh and aah over it, and gush that her little boy is now a man. Josh hits the jackpot--his mother is wild for his fat 8-incher, tells him he's lots "bigger than dad" (that makes any boy feel ten feet tall), and strokes and pets his penis. Till Josh blows his young balls and shoots his semen all over the place. Something else plenty of boys'd love for their mother to watch. Sorry for such a long comment, but I really want to encourage this talented newbie to offer us more stories about boys and their penis and dear old mom.
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Anonymous09/11/15
I think his Mom definitely wants some of Josh's big cock to not get mad and kiss etc. That would be a great chapter if his Mom came into his room and had her way with him.......... she would probably faint in joy !! Please, another chapter or two. Thank you.
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Anonymous09/11/15
great job
your story is excellent. It does show and partially explain the relationship between mother and son. My wish is that a lot of moms out there would read this and realize how some of their sons feel. you have done a great job in explaining the feeling of a son toward his mother and please continue.
I was close to cumming but I stopped myself. Not because the story wasnt good but because I wasnt ready yet. Story was very hot and a good beginning. Now progress it a bit more. Then a bit more. Keep writing
I would be satisfied with the way it ended and no part two although it begs for sequels.
Since this is your first, I will say what others said. This is a common fantasy for most males. When my Mom asked me to massage her legs, I'd go as far as I could. The few times we slept in the same bed I would press against her ass "in my sleep".
Having said that I hope any future parts will be as good as the first. Don't rush the sex. Let it happen at a comfortable pace. Let the lust and tension build slowly and then comes the great sex. Remember he is a virgin. This should be a learning experience for him.
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Too short
Not that the example in the story was too short, the story itself was too short.
It was well written, with a good backstory foundation on which to expand.
I love the premise that an open, blatant aproach is most effective for him to become a motherfucker. Worked for me.
some readers are real assholes
RNB is a first time contributor. He's given us a charming and hot little vignette, and some jerk feels the need to trash this promising writer and his work. Please, dear author, ignore idiots like that. This well-written story concerns a very common fantasy of young males. Countless boys have lain naked on top of the bedsheets, with their young penis rock hard, pretending to be asleep and hoping that their mother would peek in to see that everything was okay--and get a real good look at their big fat cock. "Show it hard for mom," boys jokingly tell each other. Lots of readers will remember standing in their room wearing maybe just a T-shirt, on the chance that mom would come in and see everything they've got hanging between their legs--and, the fantasy goes, be damn impressed. It's only natural. Look, a young guy is proud of what makes him a guy, and his mother is probably still the most important person in the world to him. Like 19 year old Josh in this fine story, he wants her to validate him as a male. If he's as lucky as Josh, mom will take his young penis in hand, ooh and aah over it, and gush that her little boy is now a man. Josh hits the jackpot--his mother is wild for his fat 8-incher, tells him he's lots "bigger than dad" (that makes any boy feel ten feet tall), and strokes and pets his penis. Till Josh blows his young balls and shoots his semen all over the place. Something else plenty of boys'd love for their mother to watch. Sorry for such a long comment, but I really want to encourage this talented newbie to offer us more stories about boys and their penis and dear old mom.
I think his Mom definitely wants some of Josh's big cock to not get mad and kiss etc. That would be a great chapter if his Mom came into his room and had her way with him.......... she would probably faint in joy !! Please, another chapter or two. Thank you.
great job
your story is excellent. It does show and partially explain the relationship between mother and son. My wish is that a lot of moms out there would read this and realize how some of their sons feel. you have done a great job in explaining the feeling of a son toward his mother and please continue.
Thanks
Great first story. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to seeing more from you.
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A nice start but too short. Keep going. She looks like a willing mom. His courage was rewarded. So let them have a good fucking.
Good start, but you are going to fiinsh this aren't you
I mean the mom has to have his big cock inside her holes. Right?
A good start..................
...........would be seeing a therapist!
Don't wait. Do it now.
Fuck that Bitch
Come on Josh let mom have a nice fat boner in her belly
Enjoyed
I was close to cumming but I stopped myself. Not because the story wasnt good but because I wasnt ready yet. Story was very hot and a good beginning. Now progress it a bit more. Then a bit more. Keep writing
so bad
Seems like a 14 year old wrote this.
more fuck and more talk pls
do mom and sis and let dad have is fun 2
Probably more to come
I would be satisfied with the way it ended and no part two although it begs for sequels.
Since this is your first, I will say what others said. This is a common fantasy for most males. When my Mom asked me to massage her legs, I'd go as far as I could. The few times we slept in the same bed I would press against her ass "in my sleep".
Having said that I hope any future parts will be as good as the first. Don't rush the sex. Let it happen at a comfortable pace. Let the lust and tension build slowly and then comes the great sex. Remember he is a virgin. This should be a learning experience for him.
Great beginning
This is a great beginning to a very good story. I am looking forward to the next.
8 by 7?
Semantics I'm sure, but if your penis is more than 2 thirds your length in girth, you essentially have something useless in your pants.
Good Keepi it going
Nice good read
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