All Comments on 'Pearly rivers on my breasts'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just keep

going, I'll go get the wash cloth

monicablumonicabluover 8 years ago
Love the visuals

...the taking of your virginity, in all places it seems, as well as the cascade on your breasts. Lovely.

AlinaXAlinaXover 8 years agoAuthor

That's new relationship euphoria for you. Give it a few years and I'll be praying that he finds a new virgin to deflower, just so that I can get a decent night's sleep and not wake up in the morning covered in cold, wet cum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Made me hard

Lovely, literate imagery. Intelligent and sexy sonnet.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 7 years agoAuthor

I wish I were again a maid

To feel my lover swift invade

My virgin mouth and pouting lips

Between my eager wide-spread hips

But every night I cry, 'Alas!'

To feel him not within my ass...

Thanks for reading & commenting!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

Well done! Could definitely work as tentacle porn!

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