Alex & Alexa Ch. 06

c'mon man

I'm already hooked ya didn't to hook me like that LMFAO.as far you editing foes I so now glaring issues so your doing his fine. I love the progress of this story. An I'm over the moon you plan to continue with this story. As for the real world do your thing. As long as you promise to finish it properly you'll hear no complaint from me LOL.I've gone back and read your other stuff outstanding performance

Love it. Keep up the good work, and please don't involve anyone else with Alex and Alexa - especially the parents. I'm really scared you made Alexa buy that strap-on to use on Karen, which would be a REALLY bad idea. I mean, sure, giving Freja a show through Skype is one thing, and maybe involving another girl as a one- or two-time threesome is another, but involving the parents in a sexual way or another guy would probably completely ruin this story for me, and right now I'm eagerly awaiting every new chapter.

Also obviously hope Alexa is alright, and that this accident will only bring them closer together, and not break them apart. If it's even semi-serious there's a good chance the parents might find out though by the look on Alex face in distress, so I hope you'll handle that well if that's the case.

Super 5* Here

Have really enjoyed it from the first, but this chapter was fantastic adding to this great story also... Keep it going

PB

Great addition but now I'm torn

Yet another great chapter in an already superb story, but as stated above now I'm torn on the parents taking part of the activities between A&A. The parents, mom mostly, have their kinky side that somehow doesn't match what A&A have going on between them. Sure Alexa had some wild sex in the past and shared her experience with Alex, but now doing it outside their special relationship might be the end if it. If the parents swing, there is some strong indication that they do, then let them keep it for themselves. Also you made it a point that the father is contempt with his wife so why broaden the sexual spectrum there. Leave the students of theirs be their driving fantasy for their hanky-panky so there is no need to try and destroy them altogether.

On the other hand this new development with the car wreck is a great way to introduce the relationship to the parents, a long as it doesn't create too much drama. I get there has to be some reason to this decision but please please do it so they end up happily together and the parents won't object.

Awesome story hope it ends happily can't wait for more.

Great story so far keep chapters coming can't wait to see what happens

It didn't go as I expected.

When you emphasized the difference between the sisters, I was sure that this leads to eventually somehow that they aren't really sisters a all. That would open the way to upstage the relationship of A&A. Never mind, great story. I hope Alexa comes out OK.
Thank you for sharing the delightful story with us,
D.S.

Man, I love your stories.
But cliffhangers such as these are torturous.

Amazing as always, but....

I have to echo what others have said and please don't include the parents. If there was to be another added at least just be like a friend of hers from Europe who came over to visit. Still loving th series.to death and can't wait for more.

Nice Story

This should be when parents find out and accept them as a couple. Wouldn't have them swap maybe watch each other.

Great chapter!

As always, an exciting chapter and with a nice cliffhanger at the end. As for adding the parents, I feel that it'd be fun as a one-time thing, a 'spur of the moment' situation where they all just fuck each other and then vow to never do it again, allowing for Alex and Alexa to continue their relationship and not have to keep it a secret from mom and dad.

Oh no, Alexa!!

Now that I'm six chapters invested in this story, I don't want to see anything happen to Alexa!!

Coming soon to (in?) a hospital bed near you

As others have already noted - excellent work - time enough perhaps for the 'rents to acknowledge/ approve of the goings on ? but they're probably too busy with their own games to participate.

More to come !!! Please

Enjoying this story perhaps more than any others......looking for more, well written chapters. Thanks

Heheheh

"We left the computer webcam and cellphones recording all night,"

What is the bet that if they watch those recording they will discover that the dad came over and saw them before he did the light trick?


I hope the car accident thing is some type of sick joke on the part of those three, a way to break the ice so that anything they discuss after that (like two randy teenagers fucking) will seem like an easy conversation to have.

I really enjoy your story and I hope this one continues for awhile but I do hope that nothing serious has happened to Alexa.

Thoroughly enjoyable and very well written....

.....though it is apparent that for the sake of the pacing, the relationship between Alex and Alexa developed rather quickly...a little unnaturally, indeed.

Anxiounsly waiting for what's next

If you have plans for Alexa to die I will stop reading your stories

skipping ahead

Skipping ahead from ch3 to ch6 reviews. I do this because I have been burned by endings in the past. Not sure if I can continue, I know it's cliché, but I like a happy ending. To much invested in this already, will have to think about if I can come back and finish this.......

love it

One of the more enjoyable series I have read.

The "handbasket" has arrived...

The one real problem with reading 'continuing' stories, here on Literotica, is that one tends to invest oneself in a particular story - and its characters - and then, with no need or warning, the author takes a departure from the main story-line, and everything goes to hell in a hand-basket. Well, folks, it appears that the hand-basket for this story has arrived.

The author began this installment with a foreword in which, essentially, he said that he has no plans for any immediate ending to the tale of Alex and Alexa. He's having too much "fun" with the characters. "Fun" is an okay thing, but the author needs to take note of the fact that, in any incest/taboo story, the predominant goal is for the incestuous couple to be able to somehow "ride off into the sunset", posing and acting like any "normal" married couple, enjoying their special variety of love and lust for the rest of their lives.

If Karen and Michael are a bit kinky and occasionally bed their students (with each other's knowledge), that's fine. Don't get Alex and Alexa involved with them in some sort of foursome. If anything, this is the prime excuse for Alex to use some of his campus connections with the geeks/nerds to lay hands on a few of those web-capable micro-cameras and bug his parents' offices and bedroom. Then he can collect some evidence of their illicit conduct. While Karen and Mike may be cool with their spouse bedding the occasional student, it's certainly grounds for dismissal from their esteemed teaching posts, if such conduct is ever made public. This would make the perfect 'threat' to hold over Karen and Mike, if either or both of them should have any objection to the fact that Alex and Alexa have become lovers.

The other thing that the author might want to be aware of is the fact that not all of his readers will share a penchant for ALL of the kinks that he, personally, has. If he likes "watersports", fine. Let him write a story about two lovers who get off on pissing on each other - and post it in the "Fetish" category. It really doesn't belong in this one. I bet he pissed off a lot of readers, with that opening shower-scene between Alex and Alexa.

Also, it'd be a kindness if he didn't post any more chapters until he either gets a new editor, or learns how to proofread his own material. Judging by the nature of the many errors in this chapter, the author dictates his text through one of the various speech-to-text programs available for either Mac or Windows, and he should know that proofreading such text is essential.

C here again, Biscuit Hammer

Sorry, not signing in in order to avoid harassment. Angry, un-laid men often get vicious with you if you're a woman with an opinion on this site.

Ignore the handbasket comment above, I have faith in what you said in your forward about wanting Alex and Alexa to be happy. Honestly, what's with the temper-tantrums on this place? People write stories and so many readers just take the time to anonymously crap all over them? At least have the acorns to sign in.

I admit, you totally freaked me out when Alex got that call at the very end. I hope Alexa's alright.

Oh, and people who criticize things happening in the story that don't fall strictly into the Incest category? Like Alex peeing in her? C'mon, if you've got a very involved story, sometimes things'll cross over. No matter what you say, this is an incest love story. That's just a fact and no amount of temper tantrums will change that.

Your other story in the novellas section, some guy left a really nasty note and hadn't even read the story. He was mad because you started another story without finishing the ones you had going? Like somehow you're obligated to keep us entertained at our schedule and convenience.

I don't know anything about your life and daily schedule. But in the month since you started publishing stories you've given us twenty amazing chapters in various stories that I really enjoy. They erotic, clever and funny and human. So there've been some editing issues. Big fucking deal. There are absolutely HORRIBLE stories on this site.

Sure, I'm being selfish and want you to publish chapters regularly and so on, but I have no right to demand that. Twenty chapters in thirty days? I'd be a total bitch if I complained about that. I couldn't believe one reviewer said 'fuck you' because you were publishing multiple stories. Maybe you like writing different stories, maybe you are trying to publish request stories for people who were kind enough to make requests as opposed to those of us who just sit here and review like we have a P.H.D. in erotic literature and dump all over the authors. Talk about pretentious.

Anyways, I'm really enjoying the day-to-day elements you add into your stories- summer employment where they can get naughty together. The hookah party with the belly dancing and the surprise shotgun kiss. That was just... funny and felt real. I liked it.

I know handbasket/tantrum boy above thinks you're trying to add in the parents and I'm hoping you don't, but if that is indeed your plan, I'm personally certain you'll do it in a way that is fun and tasteful and not disappointing.

I'm really hoping Alexa is okay. I know you said you'd continue the story, but that scared me. I promise to not have a tantrum and threaten to never read you again, because, well, I'm a grown-up.

Looking forward to the next chapter of A&A, along with your other stories!

- Cori

Unexpected turn

Biscuit, this story line has been perfect so far. Now with the ending here in the 6th installment I realize it may have been too perfect. I have loved the creativity this has had, and I feel that myself as well as some other readers are invested in the characters. That being said I won't tell you how to write your stories or what to do with your characters, that said, I also don't want to see one of the best continuing story's I have read here take that turn for the worse. I do hope this series pans out, I know that Alex is living a fantasy and kinda hate to see it turn nightmare.

Aaahhh come on. U cant end it like that.. 😡
Was a great series.... deff need a few more chapters.
So, pls finish it off.

Were dying out here!

Next chapter please!

Come on with the next chapter already. I've lost this page and found it 3 times already.

More please

needs more please

Thank you

So far this is one of only a few stories that I have felt like I have gotten invested in the characters. I also have to agree that changing your editor was probably the right choice. As for the storyline, I have to thank you for the begining blurb which gives me hope for the next chapter. Considering the chapter title I expected something a bit different.
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story with great anticipation.

Next chapter I come check ever day to see if you've posted it

Gasp!

Dun Dun Dunnn!