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So far so good
This story is written in Susan Jill Parker's tightly formed, gregarious, and unmistakeable style. Reading her stories is like listening to the cadence of the drumbeat on a Roman Galley. The story just builds and builders and the cadence is changed from time to time to a faster and faster rate as the tension of the story becomes more intense. At the end I am sure Susan will have increase the tension and the drumbeat to ramming speed. The readers of this story, and the oarsmen on this proverbial Galley will be exhausted and emotionally drained.
Susan has her detractors and some of them are not very nice to her. I am sure tat even those detractors must admit that no one else writes like Susan Jill Parker, she is unique and one of a kind.
On second thought
The use of the word gregarious in my previous comment is off. I think it would be better to say that Susan's writing and characters are well formed and tightly focused. That is what gives her stories their tension and drama, that pounding cadence of a drumbeat on a Galley.
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