by PDumbledore
Great first chapter. Can't wait to read/hear Steph scream when Ron jams that monster up her tight ass.
Can't wait for chapter two. I LOVE stories of brothers fucking their sisters tight little pussies asses and mouths. MORE!!!
This great, I love it when a girl gets stuffed with a monster and then can't live without it. Keep it up!!
That is some "HOT" damn good stuff. I like the way you write it down, so "keep it up"! (Did I just say that? OK, pun-intended)...Sammmokin'!!
wow what a start very very hot dude! now what i would love to see is her yearning for him and him catching on that she will do pretty much anything for more of him...including setting him up with her friends etc......
I think this story needs a little work. The plot wasn't very believable. There was no conflict. The brother was described as anerd, always getting picked on, and there was not really a close relationship between the two, yet they had no problem reading incestuos stories together. The sister told the brother he could masturbate, and he did it as if it were the most natural thing in the world. It sounded as though this was the most conversation they had in their lives, and in minutes she was swallowing his load. If the brother had a cock that big, he wouldn't have such an inward personality, which immediately changed as soon as he was banging the sister. You need to keep your characters consistent, and work a little more on the conflicts between characters. It makes for a much more interesting and believable story. Check out some other incest stories - try the story eros and agape - i forget the authors name, or anything by _ ,jessy19 or Anne240.
Chris
made me wet !! im off to finger my self right now !! keep writing !!
made me wet !! im off to finger my self right now !! keep writing !! forget the comment from the person who didnt like it ,,, must be an english teacher heheheheheheh
Definately continue this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Love the bro/sis stories. Too bad they don't have another sis for them to fuck (or do they?)Maybe you could work that in! Keep up the good work!!
Thank you for giving a good impression of us geeks. I don't think I could ever thank you enough! I hope you write a lot more.
Devoted Reader
A fellow Geek
Obviously she's going to fuck him again & you might have a female cousin drop in because he's damn sure got more than enough for 2 women, & during that 'orgy'-type situation, you could have him get a yen for her ass, for both their asses or you could make it an aunt, obviously younger & more adventurous than his mother. There are DOZENS of ways it could go.....
Way to go. It was a very good story. I agree that you should ignore the flame comment. So what if there was no real conflict? Who says a story needs conflict? Keep up the good work.
Just when I think it can't get any better! Your words get more orgasmic. This story was absolutely delicious!!! Live Well. Peace. TJ
I like the story. It was not offensive and it was tastefully written. All hell if my brother have huge dick I fuckem' too!!
Kept my interest in the way you built the story. Can't wait for the sequel!
Great story. Dialog was a little stiff (for instance, you never used contradictions - something that would make your characters' words seems much more realistic) but it had a good storyline and your narration is excellent.
hot and to the point! makes me wish I had a sister to fuck me! lol
I don't know why the other readers like this story. You lost my interest early-on with an 11-12 inch long, 6 inch circumference cock and spewing semen for three minutes. Really? Three minutes? I know most stories on this site are fantasies, but this one stretches it to science fiction. I like stories that are, at least, plausible. Sorry, man, but that's just me.
I read the first two on another site but never knew you wrot a third ch good work
He came for a full three minutes before he finally stopped. I had to stop after this. Wow. A full three minutes. Un-fucking-believable. How much cum is produced from a three minute orgasm.
I try to not let my skepticism ruin the story.
Wow most interesting and I can't believe she could take something that big need to make the story longer a continuing saga
total fantasy, and fun to read. It seems brother geek is almost emotionless. I know I was quite a bit more vocal my first time and got more so from then on. Females have said I talk a lot during sex. Has anyone ever seen a silent playground? hee hee. Idid find his self control and orgasm volume to be beyond even fiction. Maybe have him popa nut quickly one time? Happens to everyone. If not, well Old Al got over excited a couple times. Thank goodness for fast recovery.
A lot of fun reading, and none of the “ oh you are my brother / sister crap that takes up a page before they jump each other. good job.
oh and I must agree with the comment below my first. A shame it’s anonymous, as it is a good one. If she does anal with that fireplace log, then she has got to use a manhole cover to keep from dropping feces behind her as she walks. WAY TOO GROSS for this section. But everyone is allowed their opinion and I have yet to see a gun to my head forcing me to read anything here.
Al
I hope she treats him better after this. She was quite mean with her thoughts about him early on.