My Brother The Geek Ch. 01

Great don't stop writing

Really GREAT!! can't wait for the next chapters

Revenge of the Nerd

Great first chapter. Can't wait to read/hear Steph scream when Ron jams that monster up her tight ass.

I love brother/sister stories

Can't wait for chapter two. I LOVE stories of brothers fucking their sisters tight little pussies asses and mouths. MORE!!!

Gawd I love a brother stuffing a sister!

This great, I love it when a girl gets stuffed with a monster and then can't live without it. Keep it up!!

Thermonuclear Meltdown

That is some "HOT" damn good stuff. I like the way you write it down, so "keep it up"! (Did I just say that? OK, pun-intended)...Sammmokin'!!

making of a sub

wow what a start very very hot dude! now what i would love to see is her yearning for him and him catching on that she will do pretty much anything for more of him...including setting him up with her friends etc......

needs more

I think this story needs a little work. The plot wasn't very believable. There was no conflict. The brother was described as anerd, always getting picked on, and there was not really a close relationship between the two, yet they had no problem reading incestuos stories together. The sister told the brother he could masturbate, and he did it as if it were the most natural thing in the world. It sounded as though this was the most conversation they had in their lives, and in minutes she was swallowing his load. If the brother had a cock that big, he wouldn't have such an inward personality, which immediately changed as soon as he was banging the sister. You need to keep your characters consistent, and work a little more on the conflicts between characters. It makes for a much more interesting and believable story. Check out some other incest stories - try the story eros and agape - i forget the authors name, or anything by _ ,jessy19 or Anne240.
Chris

yummmmmy stuff hun

made me wet !! im off to finger my self right now !! keep writing !!

yummmmmy stuff hun

made me wet !! im off to finger my self right now !! keep writing !! forget the comment from the person who didnt like it ,,, must be an english teacher heheheheheheh

awsome

hope there will be more than just one more chapter :)

Great Stuff

Definately continue this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Love the bro/sis stories. Too bad they don't have another sis for them to fuck (or do they?)Maybe you could work that in! Keep up the good work!!

THANK YOU

Thank you for giving a good impression of us geeks. I don't think I could ever thank you enough! I hope you write a lot more.


Devoted Reader
A fellow Geek

Here's how you coud steer (ar?) it....

Obviously she's going to fuck him again & you might have a female cousin drop in because he's damn sure got more than enough for 2 women, & during that 'orgy'-type situation, you could have him get a yen for her ass, for both their asses or you could make it an aunt, obviously younger & more adventurous than his mother. There are DOZENS of ways it could go.....

really hot story

great story I liked it alot good going

Another great story

I loved it.

Way to go

Way to go. It was a very good story. I agree that you should ignore the flame comment. So what if there was no real conflict? Who says a story needs conflict? Keep up the good work.

yes yes yes

i loved it and i want to see more of that monster

my brother the geek .o1

it is the best that have read go man

Things that make you go Ooooohhhhh!!!

Just when I think it can't get any better! Your words get more orgasmic. This story was absolutely delicious!!! Live Well. Peace. TJ

MY BROTHER THE GEEK CH. 01

I like the story. It was not offensive and it was tastefully written. All hell if my brother have huge dick I fuckem' too!!

Great Story!!

Kept my interest in the way you built the story. Can't wait for the sequel!

Good

Great story. Dialog was a little stiff (for instance, you never used contradictions - something that would make your characters' words seems much more realistic) but it had a good storyline and your narration is excellent.

love it!

hot and to the point! makes me wish I had a sister to fuck me! lol

You lost me.

I don't know why the other readers like this story. You lost my interest early-on with an 11-12 inch long, 6 inch circumference cock and spewing semen for three minutes. Really? Three minutes? I know most stories on this site are fantasies, but this one stretches it to science fiction. I like stories that are, at least, plausible. Sorry, man, but that's just me.

nice work

I read the first two on another site but never knew you wrot a third ch good work

For real?

He came for a full three minutes before he finally stopped. I had to stop after this. Wow. A full three minutes. Un-fucking-believable. How much cum is produced from a three minute orgasm.

I really believe all these monster cocks.

I try to not let my skepticism ruin the story.

Awesome

Wow most interesting and I can't believe she could take something that big need to make the story longer a continuing saga

I want a dick in me cause im masturbating

Good story

If he fills that other hole I cannot give it even 4 stars.