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From Bible to Bedroom Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by nic33109/16/15

Excellent and very promising

I've read your entries and am happy to have come across them. You have a talent for this and I do hope you decide to continue. Very promising story line, and author. Nicely done!

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by rob135609/16/15

Nice start

Waiting for part 3 don't stop now.

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by Quickfingers809/16/15

More please

You just have to keep writing! You can't stop now!

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by Anonymous09/16/15

Keep going. I can't wait to see how he fucks her. My pussy is so wet and aching from reading this.

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by Sexiimama201309/17/15

WE NEED MORE PLEASE

First let me start off by saying !!!!!!WOW!!!! I honestly have to say that this story series is one of the best that I've read so far on Literotica!!! Please don't stop writing! Keep this story alive and then when it's finally complete please write another and another. Way to go submissivesiren26 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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by lorencino09/17/15

Great

I can't think straight because I'm so aroused and I don't know why but your story just does it for me. "WOW" is right.

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by Anonymous09/17/15

Cassie's hot little fuckhole belongs to her daddy

Cassie's father is the envy of dads everywhere. So many of them look over their baby girl--her pretty face, her lovely feminine form, and what they know she's hiding between her slender legs, her adorable little coochie--and get so hard that their fat veiny daddy-dick is practically busting out of their pants. A father wants to be the male to bust his baby girl's little cherry. He wants his big hard cock to be the first cock shoved up her tight little twat. And he definitely wants his own semen, from his heavy loaded daddy-balls to be the first great big helping of semen to flood his baby girl's cute little cunt, to fucking drown it. Cassie is every father's dream come true, because she wants, she craves, exactly the same things. Imagine a daughter who welcomes her daddy fucking her anywhere and any time he gets the urge. He pushes her up against the wall and bends her over the kitchen counter and fucks her. He climbs on top of her in her bed and fucks her. He fucks her in the car, on the lawn at night, in the bathroom at the mall, in the guest bedroom when they're visiting grandma's--whenever daddy gets a hard on, he just lowers his little princess's cute little panties, shoves his big hard on up between her legs and fucks the living shit out of her. Daddy's big fat penis is up his little darling's innocent pink vagina more than it's hanging down over his heavy balls. He loves his baby girl's sweet innocent vagina, and he loves messing it up, messing it up real bad. A perfect father and daughter relationship.

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by Anonymous09/19/15

Keep the story going it sounds great

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by Anonymous09/20/15

Nice beginning....

Outstanding job...keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous09/27/15

More?

I keep checking your submissions to see if you've posted another installment to this series.

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by Anonymous10/14/15

Goddamn

This is amazing, I love it to death, please write more!

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by I_Love_Erotica11/14/15

Daddy Demeaning Daughter

Overall I'm very much enjoying this series and the writing deserves the high ratings and compliments.

My one criticism is, IMO, the father calling his daughter a whore and slut etc is out of character even with no words being "off limits". Did not care for the father spanking Cassie as he had reassured her he was teaching her which should allow her to question him without repercussion.

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