Continues to keep me hooked as to what comes next in a following chapter. Well done! Fun to read another good piece coming out of Canada.
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Anonymous09/17/15
Nicely don
Back on track this chapter goes very well with the first 6, sorry was not impressed with the 7th. Not because of content but because of structure, it didn't flow as well as your first six or this one. Great story over all though.
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Anonymous03/10/16
Great Story Line
I've read several of your stories, each with a different story line, and each kept me wanting to read more and more. So, on that note, thank you for your efforts, truly an enjoyable interlude reading your writing. Thank you!!
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Entertaining
Continues to keep me hooked as to what comes next in a following chapter. Well done! Fun to read another good piece coming out of Canada.
Nicely don
Back on track this chapter goes very well with the first 6, sorry was not impressed with the 7th. Not because of content but because of structure, it didn't flow as well as your first six or this one. Great story over all though.
Great Story Line
I've read several of your stories, each with a different story line, and each kept me wanting to read more and more. So, on that note, thank you for your efforts, truly an enjoyable interlude reading your writing. Thank you!!
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