by cherylblossom44
Reading this I could picture myself as Noah. Thanks for this really hot and sexy story. Please post more.
Wow But it was too short! (Story of my life, too.)
It was a fun read, but it was a little choppy. One jolt was when Noah "flipped her over to her back". Not something I'd expect during a massage. Like, maybe, but not expect.
The lead into the anal fucking scene was somewhat abrupt. C'mon, give us a little foreplay here, please.
Seriously, the story was not bad at all.
As a professional massage therapist I can tell you that this kind of garbage is precisely why many women DO NOT want a male therapist working on them.
I realize this is fiction but, it fuels a fire which has no place in professional massage.
Also, the types of massage as described are totally and completely bullshit.
I think the story line is worthy but needs a little more of a build, a little slower pace, and a little more attention to grammar. I don't know what this sentence means, for example.
"I don't think anyone could every describe what you just did as why or quiet."
little typo here:
as far a sit would go
as far as it would go
another
describe what you just did as why or quiet.
shy or quiet