All Comments on 'Ass Massages are the Best'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Nice story

69stroker6969stroker69over 8 years ago
Oh my.

Reading this I could picture myself as Noah. Thanks for this really hot and sexy story. Please post more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
***

FYI: A masseuse is a woman. A masseur is a man.

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Confusing***

But almost a hot story. Thanks for the read.

Kitist02Kitist02over 8 years ago
A minor critique

Wow But it was too short! (Story of my life, too.)

It was a fun read, but it was a little choppy. One jolt was when Noah "flipped her over to her back". Not something I'd expect during a massage. Like, maybe, but not expect.

The lead into the anal fucking scene was somewhat abrupt. C'mon, give us a little foreplay here, please.

Seriously, the story was not bad at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Phuck this!!!

As a professional massage therapist I can tell you that this kind of garbage is precisely why many women DO NOT want a male therapist working on them.

I realize this is fiction but, it fuels a fire which has no place in professional massage.

Also, the types of massage as described are totally and completely bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Needs editing

I think the story line is worthy but needs a little more of a build, a little slower pace, and a little more attention to grammar. I don't know what this sentence means, for example.

"I don't think anyone could every describe what you just did as why or quiet."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Loved it, perfect length

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
nice story, a couple of comments

little typo here:

as far a sit would go

as far as it would go

another

describe what you just did as why or quiet.

shy or quiet

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