Wow But it was too short! (Story of my life, too.)
It was a fun read, but it was a little choppy. One jolt was when Noah "flipped her over to her back". Not something I'd expect during a massage. Like, maybe, but not expect.
The lead into the anal fucking scene was somewhat abrupt. C'mon, give us a little foreplay here, please.
Seriously, the story was not bad at all.
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Anonymous10/01/15
Phuck this!!!
As a professional massage therapist I can tell you that this kind of garbage is precisely why many women DO NOT want a male therapist working on them.
I realize this is fiction but, it fuels a fire which has no place in professional massage.
Also, the types of massage as described are totally and completely bullshit.
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Anonymous10/04/15
Needs editing
I think the story line is worthy but needs a little more of a build, a little slower pace, and a little more attention to grammar. I don't know what this sentence means, for example.
"I don't think anyone could every describe what you just did as why or quiet."
Amazing
Nice story
Oh my.
Reading this I could picture myself as Noah. Thanks for this really hot and sexy story. Please post more.
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FYI: A masseuse is a woman. A masseur is a man.
Confusing***
But almost a hot story. Thanks for the read.
A minor critique
Wow But it was too short! (Story of my life, too.)
It was a fun read, but it was a little choppy. One jolt was when Noah "flipped her over to her back". Not something I'd expect during a massage. Like, maybe, but not expect.
The lead into the anal fucking scene was somewhat abrupt. C'mon, give us a little foreplay here, please.
Seriously, the story was not bad at all.
Phuck this!!!
As a professional massage therapist I can tell you that this kind of garbage is precisely why many women DO NOT want a male therapist working on them.
I realize this is fiction but, it fuels a fire which has no place in professional massage.
Also, the types of massage as described are totally and completely bullshit.
Needs editing
I think the story line is worthy but needs a little more of a build, a little slower pace, and a little more attention to grammar. I don't know what this sentence means, for example.
"I don't think anyone could every describe what you just did as why or quiet."
Loved it, perfect length
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