It's Complicated Ch. 00: Prologue

Spell check isn't the only editing resource you need. 1*

English must be your second or third language.

This story is unreadable.

Grammar

It's not just the name you call your parents' mom

Igmore the three blind analmousies

WL, I went back & read your previous posting. as I find the stylism of your writing to be interesting. The named commentators for your preceding story had some moderately good advice.

The problem is finding a reliable, capable editor whose ego won't interfere with how you express your inspiration. Used in moderation you might find someone useful. Just remember, it is your responsibility to complete your story the way you want it structured.

Never trust any spellcheck or word auto-replace function. The programmers coding those functions are required to be functionally illiterate. Their homophon-phobia is blatantly oblivious of like-sounding words in and out of context.

I look forward to your future story postings.

As the great composer Sibelius said "No one builds monuments to critics!" and to quote 'whomever' "Trying and failing at something is normal in life and the hard road to success. But never trying? For fear of possible failure, is always an automatic failure."

This story has a future to grow/expand ......

.... So please do not stop. This story has great potential. So far so good. Plot & characters are good so far. What's important is that you put the thoughts on paper. Well done! Hope to see some more of your work real soon and a continuation to this lovely romantic tale.

I liked it

I read the second story to this series first and left a comment there. This story pretty much answered the background request and it didn't have as many major errors. I definitely like where the story is headed:)