The story is a great but a couple of point , Needs an introduction to explain how an lady, that old got into this situation and the relationship with the teller. I am sure that most ladies of 69 would never were 5" stilettos, although she might wear higher heels, just as I am sure that 10 inch cocks are a rarity. Neither of them adds anything to the story.
The other thing which grates with me is The misspelling of " Taut"
"taught" is teach. "Taunt" is tease and "Taut" is tight. I know they all sound the same but that's the English language for you, the spelling gives very different meanings and for me when i am reading the missspelling is like walking into an open manhole for me and breaks the flow of the story.
My mom is 68 and is like that lady, but hubby tells me she only uses crude language when she loses it during orgasm.
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Anonymous09/18/15
Sexual Preference
Why so old? Sorry, my minds eye just couldn't see this happening.
So there were some grammar errors - an interesting story - how did it cum about before you wrote about this afternoon? Would be another idea for you - hope you let us know when that new story appears.
I enjoyed that. It made a pleasant change to have a story that is not all slam bam thank you mam. The 10in cock was a bit silly. But I can assure Sue43mom that a lady 'that old' really is not 'that old' at all
She'd be amazed how much sex people in their 60s have. Lots of spare time to be filled and no kids to interrupt us!
This is my first story. It is based on an actual occurrence. I am 67 years old and the beautiful lady is 69 years old. Yes, I mis-spelled a word in the 2700 word document. No excuse. I would like to address the comments from readers. I believe that most readers are supportive of authors and criticism (unless absolutely deserved) is and should be constructive. Only one of the comments on my story (so far) has departed from this paradigm. I would like to note that this one criticism contained numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation errors in just a few sentences; roughly 5 times the errors in my entire 2700 word story. "Cast the first stone!" There is a huge difference between "critique" and lashing out. To have characterized a whole story as "spoiled" because of one spelling and one style mistake is egregious. I haven't done it yet, but I'm going to see if the criticizer is also an author. From her horribly crafted response my bet would be that her word-craft in a story would reflect the same.
Thank you for a very erotic piece. It's very realistic and I feel qualified to say that as I'm lucky enough to have a 67yo playmate. I'm 56 and adore older women. Carol, my playmate is very similar to the gorgeous lady in your story, she has amazingly shapely legs and loves wearing stiletto heels when we fuck. Her appetite for cock is huge and I'm one of several men she takes into her bed. Thanks again for a story that I could relate to so readily. You are right to say that those who critise in a cynical manner have absolutely no idea about the recreational sex some of us seniors are lucky enough to enjoy. Carol is one of several women in their 60's and 70's I've loved getting dirty with. Please write more on the senior sex genre, you have such a talent and I find it a huge turn-on.
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Anonymous09/19/15
Great story of senior love
I'm 66 and my wife is 58. I find it amazing that at this age I'm having the best sex of my life. My wife's sexual response is absolutely mindblowing and the way our bodies work together is likewise. The person who wondered why so old will be that age some day and I can only hope that he/she will be as lucky as you were with the ageless wonder and I also am.
Very nice Story!
Thank you for sharing this loving story about a 69yo loving woman and her joy for sex and love!
The Seniors also love and enjoy Sex!
I give you 5***** Stars!
(Even if the male sex was a litle big for the average size lol... - you do Not need that to make a very good story like this one! - And, why most males think the size matters....!?)
I'm a 54yo mature lesbian in a very close relationship, since my teens, with a loving 76yo Aunt, until now!
And I can assure you all that the sex and the Love are Great!
And I'm still the apprentice!
Thank you again for writting stories about Senior Love and Sex, and hope you also can make a loving story about mature lesbian love mmmmmmm
Aunt Helena
54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
How did them get to the couch? I would have like to see that part of the story as well! I'm not an author, and this is ONLY my opinion. Other than that it was perfect.
English
a good story spoilt
The story is a great but a couple of point , Needs an introduction to explain how an lady, that old got into this situation and the relationship with the teller. I am sure that most ladies of 69 would never were 5" stilettos, although she might wear higher heels, just as I am sure that 10 inch cocks are a rarity. Neither of them adds anything to the story.
The other thing which grates with me is The misspelling of " Taut"
"taught" is teach. "Taunt" is tease and "Taut" is tight. I know they all sound the same but that's the English language for you, the spelling gives very different meanings and for me when i am reading the missspelling is like walking into an open manhole for me and breaks the flow of the story.
My mom is 68 and is like that lady, but hubby tells me she only uses crude language when she loses it during orgasm.
Sexual Preference
Why so old? Sorry, my minds eye just couldn't see this happening.
Great idea
So there were some grammar errors - an interesting story - how did it cum about before you wrote about this afternoon? Would be another idea for you - hope you let us know when that new story appears.
Nice story
I enjoyed that. It made a pleasant change to have a story that is not all slam bam thank you mam. The 10in cock was a bit silly. But I can assure Sue43mom that a lady 'that old' really is not 'that old' at all
She'd be amazed how much sex people in their 60s have. Lots of spare time to be filled and no kids to interrupt us!
Feedback from the author
This is my first story. It is based on an actual occurrence. I am 67 years old and the beautiful lady is 69 years old. Yes, I mis-spelled a word in the 2700 word document. No excuse. I would like to address the comments from readers. I believe that most readers are supportive of authors and criticism (unless absolutely deserved) is and should be constructive. Only one of the comments on my story (so far) has departed from this paradigm. I would like to note that this one criticism contained numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation errors in just a few sentences; roughly 5 times the errors in my entire 2700 word story. "Cast the first stone!" There is a huge difference between "critique" and lashing out. To have characterized a whole story as "spoiled" because of one spelling and one style mistake is egregious. I haven't done it yet, but I'm going to see if the criticizer is also an author. From her horribly crafted response my bet would be that her word-craft in a story would reflect the same.
Wonderful writing
Thank you for a very erotic piece. It's very realistic and I feel qualified to say that as I'm lucky enough to have a 67yo playmate. I'm 56 and adore older women. Carol, my playmate is very similar to the gorgeous lady in your story, she has amazingly shapely legs and loves wearing stiletto heels when we fuck. Her appetite for cock is huge and I'm one of several men she takes into her bed. Thanks again for a story that I could relate to so readily. You are right to say that those who critise in a cynical manner have absolutely no idea about the recreational sex some of us seniors are lucky enough to enjoy. Carol is one of several women in their 60's and 70's I've loved getting dirty with. Please write more on the senior sex genre, you have such a talent and I find it a huge turn-on.
Great story of senior love
I'm 66 and my wife is 58. I find it amazing that at this age I'm having the best sex of my life. My wife's sexual response is absolutely mindblowing and the way our bodies work together is likewise. The person who wondered why so old will be that age some day and I can only hope that he/she will be as lucky as you were with the ageless wonder and I also am.
Great
Being a granny lover, I loved this story!
Nice Story! Well Done!
Very nice Story!
Thank you for sharing this loving story about a 69yo loving woman and her joy for sex and love!
The Seniors also love and enjoy Sex!
I give you 5***** Stars!
(Even if the male sex was a litle big for the average size lol... - you do Not need that to make a very good story like this one! - And, why most males think the size matters....!?)
I'm a 54yo mature lesbian in a very close relationship, since my teens, with a loving 76yo Aunt, until now!
And I can assure you all that the sex and the Love are Great!
And I'm still the apprentice!
Thank you again for writting stories about Senior Love and Sex, and hope you also can make a loving story about mature lesbian love mmmmmmm
Aunt Helena
54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
Great story! But .....
How did them get to the couch? I would have like to see that part of the story as well! I'm not an author, and this is ONLY my opinion. Other than that it was perfect.
Hot Sexy Story****
Wow wish I could find me a WET! one like that at that age. Great read. Thanks for sharing.
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